Thanks for trying out the game!
Appreciate the time you took for your indepth feedback and I agree especially about the level design and some story aspects being a weak point in the submission. The vision originally had puzzles and a deeper story between areas, but alas our inexperience and time was short - such is a game jam! If we ever work on the game afterwards, then overhauling the areas between towns to have more purpose is definitely a high priority. Thanks for your great feedback