A small favor for your boss suddenly turning into hauling a mysterious crate up a mountain road is the kind of opening that instantly hooks you. Do you want players to be more afraid of what's inside the crate, or start questioning why they were chosen for the delivery in the first place?
Haha got it, my brain is already automatically filling in the noises coming from inside that box 😂 I’m also helping test ISECAI, a free web AI anime academy RPG driven by free text, and I’d love to hear your first impression on how the opening hooks you and whether the next steps feel clear. Would you be down to try a little bit of it? If you're interested, I can drop the link and a unique code right here.