This is excellent!

Very nice composition that could come from a beautiful anime like movie! It gave me huge Ghibli vibes :). I like how the song evolves to different parts smoothly, never going to far from its original motif, and the gets back to the start with much more orchestration! Beautiful job, thank you for sharing! 

This was great!!  I love how designed the progression through this song is, carrying you from moment with the changes in instrumentation and rhythmic flow.  I feel like you have a really good grasp on how to wield the natural ADSR of all of these instruments to your favor to build the palette you're aiming for at each individual moment.  good work!

You definitely created a Ghibli sound with this! The opening chord progression sounds like it came straight out of Castle in the Sky and it’s beautiful! The section at 1:29 is also reminiscent of the underwater scenes in Ponyo which definitely adds to the theme correlation. You sure succeeded with working on your orchestral style! I like the different parts of your song that seem to represent different parts of a story - would love to hear your thoughts on what that might be! Thank you so much for sharing!

Great job! I like the orchestration you did, the music also had a nice contour to it.

Very atmospheric sounding where I could easily imagine the open seas. Would make an epic starting track.

You did a great job with the orchestra! What did you use as your DAW? 

Yes! This was very successful, and you have a nice ear for arranging~
There was a lot of auditory imagery and movement in this. This was wonderful ⭐️

great work! This is beautifully written, would love to know the story behind this piece and what the different parts represent. Very impressionable and cinematic, just amazing work 

Ohhh, I really love when that piano comes in around 55 seconds, it sounds so nice! The orchestral element definitely works though, great work!

To answer your question of if the orchestral sound was successful. The answer yes. And only yes. Well done!

I feel like your recording could be organized into different tracks. Other than that, the composition makes for some memorable video game music! 

That was beautiful! I love the arpeggio section in the middle. Very nice orchestral bouquet with so much variety. Something I am trying to figure out myself. What DAW and libraries do you use for this?