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A lovely read!

The characters all get you on their side early on, and you really find yourself rooting for these three to make it out and have a happy ending. (the bird representation is also a definite bonus.) The story sets you up to brace yourself for a tragedy, but ends up being something different, giving you a happy ending despite everything. The relationship between the three main characters is so sweet and fun, and getting to see them have their happy ending is lovely.

I also want to give a big shout out to the presentation, all the cg's and the camera work in the backstory sections create such a great and intense vibe. The painterly sprites also work very well, giving enough detail to understand the characters and their personalities while still being loose in places. 

If I had to give a single critique it would be that some things felt a little sudden or like they didn't have build up (The sex scene particularly felt a little sudden to me) but this is a jam game, so paring down to necessary elements is expected and didn't worsen the experience for me at all.

Overall definitely recommend!  

Just a lovely read! A short but sweet story about some cute little bakers. The star of the show is definitely the character designs and art, all of the sprites look great, and so much personality comes through in all the designs, and the baking sequences are just lovely, especially the one at the end with the finished lemon pie. The writing has the occasional odd word choice or miss spelling, but I attribute that to what I assume to be translation to english, and there were no errors that took me out of the story. 

Overall a great read with a little bit of angst but ending with a feel good  resolution!

A story that kept having me want the characters to get out, get having me hope for some solution or way for it to end some way other than it does. I mean this as an absolute compliment: truly a downer of a vn.

I loved the art, everything is rendered so soft and tenderly while at the same time creating an ambiguity that adds to the eeriness of the whole thing. The animation adds so much life and movement to the whole thing as well. (do I need to create a squiggle vision collection??)

overall 5/5! very enjoyable read.

I used several over your songs for my game https://aderie.itch.io/food-at-a-wake

Thanks a bunch for making your music available for things like this!!! it's very cool!