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I was back and forth on the ending but this was the story I was feeling at the time and I wanted to honor that. Hopefully it resonated with you.

I love the energy from this one! Well done! The front cover work is FANTASTIC!

I'm glad it was able to surprise you ☺️

LOVE this! It's got such a different vibe to it!

If I had a nickel for every time I got lost in the sauce 🤣 It's AWESOME to hear that you have an idea! The best thing about this style of jam is you don't really HAVE to get everything out. No one is saying you can't continue to develop your idea and add to it. 

You're gonna crush it! 😁

I'm glad it hit for you 😊 It really felt like I hit a flow state on the design with this, even the "imperfections" that would ABSOLUTELY have been there.

I'm glad it landed well ^_^

I think I figured out an angle that will make sense. I think we hear from Scott a few years later. This gives us a more direct source on what was happening at Hireling Press.

Alright, I have a clean first two acts. I now have a month to decide on the biggie: Do I make a third act, or do I purposefully leave questions?

Eewww and oohhh 😁

I appreciate that 🥰 I'm also glad the 20 Questions hit right! I've got more story to come, I'm just polishing it, making sure it feels like a good "found footage" tale.

I appreciate that 😁 Working on the "Geofire" section, and the stories really scratching an itch for me... And also I've got like 12 pages of Honor's Call written too 😂

Y'all mind if I bounce ideas here? I'm almost 12 pages into a thing, and I want to make sure I'm not getting lost in the sauce.

Is the initial hook in The Pitch document interesting, or does it need more build? I love the idea of a "Yahoo Groups" page talking about a game that was never made, but if you don't want to turn the page, then I need to make some nudges to draw people in better.

This jam is REALLY scratching my creative itch ^_^

I had this EXACT thought noodling with ideas. I made a really cool cover and got lightly bummed that I couldn't flesh it out fully 🤣

Dragon art credit Tania Herrero

Here's a cover I super love but I'm not sure what to do with. Perhaps someone else will dig it?

Personal preference: I feel like that's got Presence doing a LOT of lifting. Having a dedicated "Investigation/ digging through old texts" Attributes for this game that's different from the Vibes Attribute feels right, Intellect helping you line up your shots feels right, and Presence making people "Sorcerors" feels right. 5 attributes also isn't unprecedented in the other Borgs. 

I 100% see where you're coming from though, and this TOTALLY makes sense. HONESTLY Ranged weapons being Presence, and Gnosis becoming "Wizard spells" over "Sorceror spells" could EASILY be a thing.

This definitely needs better wording. The intention is you steady yourself for a more guaranteed hit and as a result, it's easier to hit you. "Raise your Defense difficulty by 2 to roll 2d10 on Shooting tests instead of 1d20" is a much cleaner way to say it. This choice would be for a "I don't need to be fancy I just need a better chance at hitting" kinda moment.

That's the plan ^_^ I'm still fiddling with it, I started posting to this page to make myself get ingredients on the plate