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If I had more pages available to me, I would've loved to do all these things! It's definitely a fair critique, though; I may have bitten off more than the page limit could handle. If I still have the enthusiasm after the jam is over, an expanded version is high on my list. Thank you so much for reading!
Thank you so much for such thoughtful and extensive feedback! I agree on basically all counts. It would be nice if there was more space; if I'm still enthused about this thing when the jam is fully over, I can certainly see myself developing an expanded version with more room to breathe and larger font (sorry for your eyes).
Maybe I am naïve -- and it is my first time entering a jam like this/publishing a module pdf -- but it really didn't occur to me that people would print them! I don't own a printer and usually take play/GM notes from pdfs by hand, but concede that I might be the freak in the hobby. Obviously this thing is entirely unsuitable for printing, for a wide range of reasons (there's text boxes outside the bleed margins!), but I didn't see any printy guidelines in the jam rules, so out the window that concern went.
I'm glad you found stuff to like, and thank you for reading! I had a lot of fun putting it together, and reading feedback like this is so helpful and gratifying.
We're interested! We (@giantrobottackler and I) wrote Flood and Flora. Let us know if you need anything from us, and we'll see if I can resist the urge to faff more with the drawings. /jam/mythic-bastionland-jam/rate/3811033





