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I know AI use is sort of a touchy subject, so I'm not here to call it out. I think I read that you do the actual writing but AI "expands" it or something; I'm not sure of the distinction with just using AI at that point.

Sometimes the writing is jarringly unnatural, like the "Survivable access"/"Not an invitation" in the Paragon arms, and once you see blips like that you start to see them everywhere. At this point I don't really engage with the prose, which is a shame because I know you've put a lot of time into the setting. 

This is a great game and I appreciate you making it available for free. If you have time in your dev cycle to go back and scrub or tweak the writing, I think it would be well-spent. 

Thank you, that helped! I had no idea you could grind the cultivation activities that far, and I hadn't thought to check the records.

Most people seem to advanced further, but: how do you get enough qi for Resonant Heart? I did all the Paragon Cave installations and have been looping the longevity training for a while with no visible benefit; don't seem to live long enough or build qi fast enough to hit the requirement. What should I be building instead?