Well it is a demo and still being formed and worked on, it's only logical that for now the lore is kind of bundles together, and honestly I really enjoyed how much there was to read, it really added to the environment and the overall detailing of the home, the eeriness and the connection to the character we play as.
Overall me and my friend highly enjoyed the game, the art was visually perfect for the vibe of the story and well done and consistent, the horror was well done, and I do personally love when choices can change entire aspects of the game, and it really encourages me to play again in the future when it's built that way, versus a simple changes so small you aren't sure they'll make really a difference majority of the time
I think the lore wasn't Overly fast paced, specifically considering it's a demo and likely if it was that far of a slow burn, it never would be able to gain an audience to continue hearing from, and to understand what is happening for the future and what they are supporting! I do like the current pacing for a good play when you don't want to dedicate several play sessions to it, but I agree I would love to see a version where it's a slower burn on the lore and major plotline
However, absolutely NO disrespect to your opinions, I thought I'd share my own on the matter, overall the game was very fun to play and watch be played, and I'm glad to see so many people here in the comments talking about it