first of all, i absolutely adore your art style. you've given the characters so much life, and i can really see the effort you've put into them! i'm beyond excited to see this project flourish.
what has left me a little disappointed, however, is that the description of game states the student we play as is gender-neutral, yet throughout the dialogue, the student is addressed using feminine terminology and is outright implied to be a girl. as someone who feels seen when given the option to be androgynous in stories, it felt a little like i was given false hope in that regard.
of course, this is your story, so i won't complain too much. i simply wanted to voice my thoughts overall. i would definitely suggest changing the description if you're intending for the player student to be seen as a girl rather than gender-neutral. keep up the great work!