Very 8-bit game like! I can imagine this in terraria or something similar! I enjoyed this very much :)
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I found it a bit hard to keep up with the triple meter for the whole way through- I think a bit more emphasis on the first beat in some parts would have been nice. I enjoyed the light ish feel throughout, and I actually enjoyed the percussion with the orchestra! The transition between the darker section and the lighter one in the second half felt a little unnatural, but something like that would be an easy enough fix. I thought overall that it was a nice mix and fit the theme. Well done!
What are the cool sounds you found for voice? I also use Logic from time to time, so I'm interested haha. When you hear the voices more, I'm wondering if you can add a softer attack, and a bit of a sustain? Maybe some portamento? I find voices and strings hard to sound human like. I also liked the fade out at the end. Overall, a very grand piece which I enjoyed! Nice work!
I liked the melody line around the 2 minute mark, and also how the drum came in earlier on in the piece- that felt quite natural. Some of the transitions (especially the last one in the last ten to fifteen seconds ish) felt a little quick/unexpected, so I'm wondering if maybe you extend the space between each part or if you use something as a pivot between the two sections? Overall a nice piece which I enjoyed :)