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Thank you so fricking much.
The friendly part came from you first ! Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to leave my novel a review like that.

Have a fantastic day and I hope you will continue to enjoy the novel ! I will make sure of it.

Thank you so so much ! Really glad you like it !
Comments like these only strengthen that feeling

And thank you tremendously for taking the time and leaving a review as well. That helps a ton !

Oh man oh mann ! So the details I try to leave actually got picked up !
You are the first person that has commented on those things and you made me so happy because i do try to leave things here and there, hoping some people might notice ! You have a very good eye !

First of all thank you, truly truly thank you for this comment and the amazing words you said to describe the novel. They mean the absolute everything to me as I do really want to create something for people that might enjoy.

SPOILERS FOR PEOPLE WHO HAVEN'T READ THE NOVEL YET 
Yes the bird does show up in the same world/dimension meaning teleport to Nera's front door step. I very briefly showed the MC texting his mother before entering the portal
I later mentioned this before the NSFW scene that he did leave her a message before going, but she still might be worried about him.

I tried to convey a message here in a sense that, when he left her that message he still had service on his phone, where as in this other world/dimension of course that would not work. It might be a little bit too much but I like to leave little details like that hahah

Also yes ! The rubber ducky will appear more in the story not always but yes it will play a part ! As well as the bird, they do have meaning ^^

For the NSFW scenes.. I have been doing other animations behind the scenes, have one that is the longest one I made on my patreon or youtube, it's non cannon just a little something I wanted to make for a friend of mine and at the same time sharpen my animating skills as I am still learning.
I will 100% add as many NSFW scenes as I possibly can BUT I will try and make sure for them to make sense.. not just to throw them away as, hey you JUST did this thank you ! Drop your pants NOW. hahaha

I will be honest this first NSFW I tried ( the one in the novel already ) to make it fit the story as much as I can but I also did want to show a scene like that so the readers can know, that yes I will be making NSFW animations, I will always be trying to make them better and I will also add sounds, nsfw voices and music to them all for a better experience I hope.

I will set up characters both main and side, for those scenes, while having the main LI's be more of a slow burn but that will eventually be more romantical, close and personal leading to much better love/NSFW scenes. I will also focus on other types of animations that will try to just bring more life to the world. This next update I have something planned and I cannot wait to show it.
 
Thank you so so much. Thank you. For taking the time and writing this to me. Like I said before it means everything currently to me. My focus is this novel and I want it to be good, so seeing stuff like this. Just pushes me even further.
Also more of a P.S
If.. you have a little bit of extra time on your hands, if I can ask for a review on the novel to leave any amount of stars on it it would be of massive massive help. It helps the novel stay alive and hopefully bring more people to check it out !

Have a phenomenal day LordGoonerOfGoon. Thank you. 

hahahah thank you brother !! 
Your words mean so so much. I'm very glad and happy that you love the novel !
I cannot wait to show the next update and hope that you will enjoy that one too. Well I will make sure that you will hahah

Have an amazing day Dami. Thank you.

And the review !?!?
Thank you LK01 ! Really. That helps massively.

Man brother thank you so much !
It means an insane amount to see that you think it is great and you are loving it ^^

Cannot wait to show the next update and more !

I'm framing this comment somewhere I have to, it will be good fate to read it on the daily hahah
Thank you again !

Thank you so so much for this amazing comment and feedback Zell
It means the world to me truly

Yes ! I will have the grammatical errors polished and changed for the next update and will do a better check of them in the future. Can't be having that anymore.

I am so fricking glad you like Nera seeing as how she will be a major part of the story as a character, she needed to come out as she did ! And well to continue down that path hahah

Can't wait to showcase the world and where it is going, thank you so much for taking the time playing, reviewing and leaving me a feedback. 
You did everything any dev would always want to see and hope for.

Also thank you for the call on the name, bad part from my side if I'm being honest I really thought I did actually leave a default name but it must have slipped my mind entirely. Will have that for the next update

Thank you for everything, enjoy your day to the max !

hahahah thank you Hunter
Glad to have you here ! 

Hope you keep enjoying it with future updates too ^^

Hahah thank you my friend yet again ! I have the answers ^^

1. The next update will for now not have the Nera NSFW. I am so so darn happy that you and other people as well actually like her, as she is a MAIN love interest in the story. There will be others as well, main and side ones. But Nera is number one haha
I wish to showcase the proper relationship development between the MC and Nera, for it to grow to that stage little by little and have it be done properly. So I will not rush into the NSFW part but I will make it right. I cannot wait to show it grow to what it will blossom into.

2. As for the next update I try to make an update once every 3 months, so I would say in 2-3 months It will be done. I had to change my plans for this next update as I had gotten some amazing tools and plugins from an amazing friend which will help me show the world even better than before and I cannot wait to show that, all thanks to these amazing plugins.

Thank you again GaleArtemis. It truly means a lot !

Hey Rick ! The novel is kinetic, meaning no choices to be made, just a story to read and hopefully enjoy.

But yes, there will be a harem that will develop itself as a close group, as the story goes on with new characters too. ( I will not say how many to not potentially spoil parts even though it is just a number )
There will also be NSFW with other quote on quote SIDE characters that won't specifically be a part of the main group but will still play a role within the story.
Won't ever have NTR, nor any sort of implications for other characters. The story will revolve around the MC always.

¡Hola, amigo! Estoy usando un traductor para decir esto, así que disculpa si hay errores, jajaja. ¡Muchas gracias por tu comentario, significa mucho para mí! Tengo muchas ganas de mostrar la próxima actualización y continuar la historia también. Que tengas un día maravilloso ^^

No quiero ser una molestia, pero si tienes tiempo, ¡dejar cualquier tipo de reseña de la novela ayudaría muchísimo! ¡¡Muchas gracias de todos modos!!

I'm very happy to see that you think Nera is adorable ^^
Really glad you enjoy the story thus far ! Can't wait to show the next one, more showcase of what is the story going for and heading !

Thank you so much

Duuudee thank you so fricking much ! hahaha
This is exactly what I HOPE to see.. it means a lot to me

Really glad and happy you liked it ! There will be more cannot wait to show it animations included !!

If you by chance have some time a review of ANY rating would tremendously help me out too. It helps with getting more people to be able to see it.
If not I truly mean this. Comments like these alone just make my whole week now not just day !!

GaleArtemis.. Thank you so fricking much for this beautiful comment.
This seriously just made my day !

More to come ! And yes the content will be moving forward focusing on story and with it, character development, more locations and animations !
Thank you so so much for playing this

This comment has already done so much.. but if you have the time leaving ANY type of review on the game will massively help it get more eyes as well.
Have a phenomenal day !

Damn.. you left a 5 star too.
Thank you. Seriously. The support is everything.

Well you just made my heart go updownup  hahah

Thank you very much for that comment, it tremendously means a lot to me ! I cannot wait to show the next update.
If by chance you have the time on your hands a review any star would be of a massive support to get more eyes on the novel. 
Much love and thank you truly again !

Thank you so so much for the reply. It means the world to me brother !

Really glad that you liked it. Cannot wait to show the next update I will be using the animations to help tell the story better even more as I got more comfortable with it !

It does not feel right to say this but if you did enjoy it ( even if you didn't ) any reviews left on the game would tremendously help it rise and get more eyes on it. If you have the time to spare I would GREATLY, greatly appreciate it. 

Enjoy your day, truly thank you !

Helloo my friend. I don't have other languages other than English at this moment. In the future I will be adding more for people to better enjoy the story !
 
Cannot say specifically for time but since you are the first person to ask for a different language. I'll make sure to make Chinese be the first one added as a option ^^

Enjoy your day !

Brother you made my entire week just from this comment.. thank you thank you

It is just the start and I am still figuring out how long of an update an.. update should really be in terms of everything really ( read time, how long the story will eventually be don't want it too long - i say that since I already know the ending and my goal is to actually get this finished with as little as filler as possible while it still makes sense or doesn't feel rushed ) > still figuring that out so feedback is always always appreciated

hahah absolutely get you, THOSE scenes were my first ever too and some I love how they turned out some.. well they can be a BIT done better and I can include more stuff
But now ? That I actually know and understand how things work !? Hohooo can't wait to show more !

Truly thank you bro for this comment. It may seem like just a reply or comment to some but it really really means a lot to me. So so happy you had a good experience with this.

Hey RebelliousRam ! Thank you so so much.
It is actually yeah, I'm doing it and learning as I go animations included, the first ever animations I have made in my life is the one at the start with the duck hahah

I want to be able to create a lot of animations to showcase parts of the story, combat included.. the next update will of course continue to have them in key places where it can add more to the story !

I hope you'll enjoy the story and that you did so far too. It means a ton !

Also sorry.. is this on phone or windows ? 
If it's on phone how much RAM does the device have if I can ask you that ?

I think this is the memory leak I mentioned which is now fixed but will get updated soon with the new update coming soon. But i still don't want to rule out other possibilities.
Thank you !

I don't know if I have indeed fixed it already I will do more tests before the next update which is coming out soon but BECAUSE of your previous reply I looked further into it and found I have been using a wrong command that could cause memory leaks and have since changed it.

This is before I am releasing this next update so you taking the time to say this very much have saved me from soo many issues that others might have also gotten especially since it is a important update for me.. Thank you bro truly for that

Could I please pester you if it's no trouble and let me know which dialogue you see last before the crash and does it happen always at that specific line or no ? 

Is it this line perhaps ? 
"What do you need ?" ( Main Character line )
Or does it happen around that area of time no matter the specific line ?

Hey, can you specifically tell me when that happens or even better which line of dialogue exactly if it's no trouble ? If its after a certain object collides with someone's face then my apologies for that, that is where the Prologue ends for now. 

It was my first time making a novel and I just completely did not think of leaving a message at the end for people.

The next update is coming in very soon and will be longer than the current prologue. 

Thank you so so much for playing this and sorry for the inconvenience. 

So sorry about that! It's actually the end of the Prologue for now. It is my first time making a VN and I did not even consider I should leave something for the reader to let them know, like a hey thanks for playing or a heads up. I know now and I will implement it for the next update.

The game will be 100% free always. I do have a patreon for people willing to support my work as well as able to play the new release of the game prior to the official public release along with other perks currently and that I will add more in the future as the story develops.

I am in the works daily for Act 1 and it will be longer than the prologue along with  showcasing the world I am building, other characters and getting to know them more. Along side a very first NSFW scene in the story.

Thank you for playing the game I hope you enjoyed it truly. Any feed back is always appreciated. 

To be honest as of now no, not considering it or planned especially for the main characters that will be introduced. They won't have those sort of scenes

But I will keep an open mind to what people want to see moving forward even if they might be just short scenes ( skip able ) or one offs with side characters.

So as the VN develops I will pay attention to what people will want to see and I will have no trouble weaving anything in ( except NTR, hard no on that. ) that can make sense and won't affect the story what so ever or the experience if possible, if not then I won't be adding anything that doesn't make sense to have in the VN

I just realized the patreon version has animated scenes, when I will get it can I drop my save from the itch version and continue off there ? 

Just wanted to say, you've made such an amazing game here I enjoy it so much. Currently playing through it, ACT 2.

The story and characters are 10/10. Easily became my favorite so far to read through out of all the games I've played
The way you present the story bits n pieces here and there honestly don't know how you've pulled it off it's amazing

All I can say is I hope we get as much content out of this game as possible. And any future games that you will make, you are good.
Love it !!