Thank you for the kind words! Because the Jikininki isn’t meant to be a threat, I’d give him the following stats: 3 HP, 10 STR, 10 DEX, 8 WIL. I’d reduce his WIL if players denied him access to corpses.
Thank you! If you do end up running it, I’d be curious to hear how it goes. I wonder if it’s telegraphed well enough that the characters should investigate the temple at night, specifically.
I really enjoyed the vivid, imaginative writing! The map is also very nice. I think there’s an overreliance on puzzles with a single specific solution. The description of the trap in room five could have been clearer. Good stuff overall!
Excellent visual design! The cover, map, layout, colors, and spot illustrations—every aspect shines. The setting feels cohesive and evocative, and the writing is clear and concise. And there are cool ideas here, too:
"He believes the Winter Worm must be allowed to grow great and strong so that—thousands of years from now—it can eat the world, the stars, the night…"
Thank you for taking the time to write such a thorough comment! I super appreciate the feedback. I agree that paring down the intro to flesh out the encounters and minor characters properly would be a big improvement. Actually, all of your notes are on point. You'd make a great dev editor—genuinely. And yes, I absolutely plan to release more adventures soon!
I'm always so impressed by your talent for evoking a distinct, richly-imagined vibe with crisp, impactful sentences. Great map, gorgeous colors, and solid font choices—this is a very strong entry! It's a pity about the font size, though
