I really liked your game and felt it was written well. The choices were not too obvious but their outcomes made sense.
The story is well written, however I felt confused when playing about what was going on.
The story is cohesive and I understood what I was supposed to do from the start. Only things I noticed were a few grammar mistakes.
the game was fun and the mechanics felt balanced. Only issue I had was understanding the instructions.
The instructions and win conditions were clear but it felt like it was impossible to get rid of all your cards and win.
