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My character has the star fragment. I only thought it was a bug because the text mentioned a box my character got from a teenager, which is why I thought it was a bug. I thought it was talking about the guy who bumps into you in the ox district.

Hello, not sure if this is a bug, but I got the event where I'd talk to Crux after advancing, even though I gave the box back to the dude who bumped into me. 

Entering into a sexual relationship with an employee and then firing them after they catch feelings is still bad bro.

Hello, when writing dialogue, it's better to start a new paragraph when a different person speaks or takes an action, as it makes it clearer that someone new is talking/doing something.

For example, this paragraph:

"You're Adrian's sister." Dante kicks the ball towards her, watching her easily catch it with the toe of her cleats, and uses it to bump the ball up and into her hands. "I am. But who are you?

Would look like this:

"You're Adrian's sister." Dante kicks the ball towards her, watching her easily catch it with the toe of her cleats, and uses it to bump the ball up and into her hands. 

"I am. But who are you?"

These changes make dialogue a lot easier to follow imo. Hope this helps, and I'm excited to see where this story goes.

My bad, I usually don't read content warnings so I missed that.

Would it be possible to add a way to adjust music volume? The music's great but it's a little loud sometimes.

-Be L

-Fuck your employee

-Fire them because they caught feelings(?)

-Hire someone who is unqualified because they're your friend and you find them hot

L is kind of a terrible person, huh?

justice for marisol :(

peak

and the Marquessa!

I need more Lumi!!

v3 the goat

absolutely need more of this