Looking forward to everything your showed us. It would seem like you plan on making things messy around there when it comes to how we win over basically everybody, some are hell of an extreme, some are vanilla, certainly excited to see where you go with this.
Ty, our icon of change, huh. The story put it very bluntly and made sure we paid attention, to how difficult it is when you hide apart of yourself, and stay in a relationship that you aren't truly there your for partner or yourself.
I also admire how you showed that most of us who are out, are celebrating Pride and being loud is also for those who can't, who are finding themselves, who know it's a death sentence, for anyone who can't outwardly express themselves, they have a community around the world celebrating their existence.
Visually stunning, story feels good so far and feels fairly inspired by Twilight, and maybe Straight!? in some areas, and I was surprised, though I shouldn't have been seeing how much effort went into building this world, you showed us the reason Adrian left home, which is a brilliant hook to get drawn in to Adrian's life and how he'll get attached to the way too damn gorgeous Love Interests, Romeo and Jett are certainly my favourites so far.
Only draw back was the train sequence those cuts were very hard and fast, a warning for that section would be a great heads up. The water is another thing that was a little iffy, quality was great, but while it was angulating through song it looked a little off texture wise.... maybe try ripples hitting off the posts, rocks and coming off from the lands edge or you know what, ignore me entirely, because this is your story and world building and it looked great and I am being nit-picky about visuals and I'm pretty darn sure that'd be more animating work for you.
Fascinating start, we can see how each reaction effects which way we react and how DR. Lynx reacts to us. The story so far feels quite put together and the conversations flow well.
I'm not ready for the story to end... Although, I will say it has been an incredible written story and the artwork in this has / is fantastic, the atmospheric sounds chefs kiss.
Then I apologize for my part if you felt any pressure, I hadn't seen the other comments from the main page, since my question felt like I was pressing you an answer, I'm sorry didn't mean for it to come off that way.
Sorry for even bothering to wonder how you'd continue the story, I was genuinely curious and I wanted to leave a question showing that I was. I, of course I would have waited, I've been enjoying the stories within the story you've been making. I guess I deserved this, since I'm the idiot for even thinking of that question. THANKS Y'ALL and Author for making me realise my idiocy
Attitude and big booty, that is all I got from this initial launch. The options you did allow us to explore felt great but also made me wonder what you are planning for the next part of the story
This update to the story was and is wild. It's lovely that the two get together so lovingly, but what the heck was that ending, poor Cody can't catch a break on the summoning route and neither can Scribbles.
I really like the story between the two of them and how they are really good pair for each other, but that trauma was psychologically insane, poor Alvy groomed and manipulated in to the misfortune others forced him into.
How are you going to even continue the stories when you've made such a definite sign that you've cut it off?
This was an enlightening part of the story, mischief or chaos is the goal but its also up to us how we act through the story. Hot damn, seeing how we looked was both fascinating and tempting, great work. Agent's story is a lot more complicated than we thought so thanks for clueing us in to the past of our MC.
The Sinner Ability is wild and I can see pros and cons with it depending on how you direct it, Agent could be using the ability to not only trap a target from moving but also Agent is also immobile in hell while doing many a thing in that mindscape of theirs. What would happen to the real body if they are cut of from that mindscape, if they need to go somewhere or if the enemy attacks. Granted we've only seen a glimpse of what's going on in the story so far.
I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO WHAT YOU MIGHT BE COOKING UP
Since Itch.io is Re-indexing free NSFW content, or so they say, will we be stuck with the unfinished demo version of the game. Will you be releasing the full game here for free? and having a paid version on other platforms?
I'm curious because beyond the sex, the story is interesting and I and many others, I'm sure, would love to support you, and your game in any way we can do so.
I don't know what happened but "Room 3,Just Like Before", after meeting with Leatrix the game brought me to the map to start the next part but it doesn't continue, there isn't another part showing up.
Hot damn, MC's sin ability would drive anyone to the state you've allowed us to see Millie get to. I take it from here, you'll bring the choice of having her cheat or not, because that was wild
The story elements seriously work incredibly well together, from settings, character models, the environments and action scenes even the spicy stuff.
I have to admit, I stumbled onto this story and very much liked how you brought us into a world that has people who can destroy our MC but also make them feel like they aren't indestructible.
''Normal" you say huh?... I for one would not call that emotional gut punch normal. They're both hurt from their relationships, but Baxter prefers to live his life with honesty even when he's playing tricks he was and being honest.
Mylo is confused, hurt and afraid right now, he doesn't know how and is incapable of moving on from his damaged self-esteem, morale and love. He is in a fragile state and he'll need some time and help to heal and move on to a healthy relationship.... which is Baxter whether he admits it or not.
This recent build to the story has me standing on my toes, I mean how are you going to tease and withhold answers from us!. However yeah I enjoyed how it all came together even the unfinished emotional moment
The new sprite models have so much personality to them and it's great to see them with more expressions.
Okay so Mikko is really good at keeping a straight face but dude is hurting as well, Arvo can't catch a break at all, first he apologised for the separation, explained he had a crush and that he loved Mikko but saying that he has feelings for Mikko still is difficult because they just reconnected and he needs to process his feelings and emotions just as much as he needed to be truthful with Mikko. It sucks that Arvo and Mikko are acting "Normal" when things are far from it.
That was some ending to this patch of the story. He wasn't arrogant or at least it didn't feel so to me, but damn that's one way to show us that he isn't invulnerable... Gonna be looking forward to more of the story developing and seeing what happens
This was an interesting new part to the story, I like that we learn so much more about the world your making, not only that but it seems as though there will be a huge conflict between this hidden faction and the government and our MC is in the thick of it all, and unwilling participant
That was so stressful, so glad Damian is being a friend and protector in all of this, while we're being hated by everyone for a job we sure as heck didn't want to do
I enjoyed the demo and it was so good to be enthralled by a glimpse of your storytelling and the artwork and animation for the world was so pretty to look at. I'm just wondering will the story continue or was this to test the waters?
I've been enjoying the story so far and I do have some questions, Noah is in a constant state of being morally grey and we get to mould him from our choices. However it would seem that during the story that he is intended to be a saviour or destroyer is this a crucial part to how he gets his abilities?
The fact Noah is Half-Human, Half-Angel is really cool and an awesome concept and from the Banner art, he could be a fallen angel or an angel which actually terrifies me to what in the heck you have instore for the poor lad.
Great story so far and looking forward to seeing more. Have an awesome New Year ahead.
Your game came out of nowhere for me, and I must admit the concept alone made me curious and I played it and I definitely enjoyed how you've built your story
I've enjoyed what you've made so far, though this anticipation has me in mess because I wanna know what sort of crazy shenanigans we're instore for. I can wait though since I stumbled upon this
This VN most certainly was an awesome adventure so far, and the relationships that we build with the village feels as wild as they come. As I played, I could see this world and relate to some of the interests and found that little Tiger though irritating is quite endearing.
I'm excited to see and hear any new developments coming, will definitely be keeping an eye out
