Hello, I've made an itch.io account for the reason to comment.
I have not much to comment (much like Momo on politics), other than that I found DottingGames's response insightful. I was really engaged by the character during the subversion and I found the game to be fantastic. Having played other games with similar subversion tactics (DDLC,OMORI), like dropping/distorting the music, leaving space between dialogue, jump scares, its reasonable to expect that the shock factor would diminish in effectiveness as they become more cliche/well known by the player, but that wasn't the case for me here. The execution of the subversion was great. The personality of Momo is apparent (stories should have characters that are raw and real!), and the commentary as described by the commenter above me I found very enjoyable to experience.
Sorry, I don't have anything constructive for you. Just wanted to compliment.