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Barely started up the game and became IMMEDIATELY obsessed with the UI/dialogue box because I've never seen one done like that before :33 besides that, I'm soo glad I live in an era where these games are being made for all the ex-cringe edgy kids who were obsessed with creepypastas while growing up (me. I was that edgy kid lmao.) <3

Really enjoyed my time with the demo lol and I have seen in a comment that this is sort of supposed to be obsessed x obsessed buut... I was wondering if there could possibly be an option to still continue trying to catch the ghost  even when the player chooses to put their new PJs in the bag and not wear them, instead of ending up with the sand end?

Obviously this is just purely personal comfort and preference sort of thing, but ig it doesn't hurt to ask lol  ⌃⌃'

btw just curious.... if this WOULD potentially end up as a dating sim one day...... would it have just Jeffrey as an option or would we get other creeps as love interests as well...? 👀👀

this would go SO hard as a dating sim, my edgy younger self would be ecstatic <33 can't wait to see more of this game in the future for suree

I don't mind sprites of the MC per se, but that's only if customisation is possible, to be honest 😅 but the issue with that is that it's obviously a lot of work, and I'd honestly prefer the devs put that time and effort into the writing and other art for the game!! And with preset sprites, they are just sort of very limiting for the player if that makes sense? Which is why I think it'd be nice to have the option of either picking a sprite AND also having the option to have none! I've seen it with some other visual novels before too :3

Very excited by this news!! Buut I was also wondering, would it be possible to pick for the MC to have no sprite? 

I am definitely excited to see more of this game!! And the art is just mwah, delicious, cannot wait for more CGs

Howeever, I did notice that in there are a lot of instances of incorrect pronouns/gendered terms being used. To be more specific, I always pick the option to use he/him pronouns, but I've stumbled upon a number of moments where characters use some version of "she" instead or call the MC the Lady or future wife 😬

I was also wondering if there's a chance to maybe get the option for the MC to pick what kind of outfit they're gonna be wearing? Idk if this ties into the incorrect pronouns bug, but it's not exactly great to pick masculine pronouns and then have the MC wear a dress and what seems to be an overall very feminine outfit.

Of course it's not the worst thing ever lol, I am still fully looking forward to enjoying the whole game!! It's just a thing to keep in mind, cause I'm sure there are more people out there playing a game where their character is sort of forced into wearing typically gendered clothes instead of something at least neutral (like a tunic, for example) :3

Okay, so I read through all the posts you linked once I finally got some free time today! If my mind took in everything correctly, then I'm very excited to see pairs that might seem like they're already being built up potentially break apart once they realise they're actually really incompatible will be great (I live for the drama when the mood strikes). Ngl, I'm probably never gonna be fully  objective here, as I've had waaayy too many experiences of IFs or VNs setting up relationships between ROs waaaay too early and/or quickly to the point it felt genuinely icky to try and romance the characters included in those scenarios 😬 and I mostly don't really buy into any "opposties attract" types of tropes (I can't seem to pick a struggle, I know, it's a full on curse)

However I fully understand that there are just things one can't fully judge with an unfinished story and with only about half the cast being barely introduced lmao. 

But I'm def gonna stay tuned for any future updates as patiently as my silly brain can manage lol! And if it's not annoying, I either might add onto the feedback or mayhaps sign up for that beta testing... although idk how useful I would truly be as a beta tester, as someone who goes for the masc presenting characters only 😭 but we shall see!

Very intrigued by the dating reality TV show setting and honestly excited to see where the whole story goes, but I do have a bit of feedback/some thoughts on the demo so far that I hope could be answered? A lil bit?

-I did read in another comment that there are predeterminted pairs planned for the full game, for all the characters not picked by MC, but... It all sort of feels already too rushed in what is esentially supposed to be the prologue/chapter 1. It's totally possible I might be understanding the characters all wrong lol, but if not, then the first pairs just also feel quite strange???  To break it down more (and so sorry for the long ahh text in advance):

-Now this point will only work if the only options at the start will be Dmitry and Kalea even once the full game is released BUUUT I don't see how Makai and Kailee, and then Dmitry and Anjali pick one another so quickly ...? From what I'm gathering, Makai is supposed to be this very closed off guy, who's cautious of everyone and doesn't seem to enjoy socialising all that much (at least with total strangers) so I don't quite get why he's so okay with someone like Kailee immediately attaching herself onto him, ESPECIALLY with her put on behaviour of being besties within seconds, while simultaneously acting weirdly possessive over the guy whenever he's interacting wit MC in literally any sort of way?

-And it's kind of the same deal in my head with Dmitry and Anjali. I get that Dmitry is sort of supposed to be the very kind hearted golden retriever type, but then it's confusing (at least to my super overthinking brain) for him to go for Anjali, of all people, when she's just endlessly rude, condescending or obviously turning her nose up at everyone and only going for Dmitry cause she seems to find him physically attractive. Does he just try and force to see good in people even if he hasn't seen any evidence of it being there? I mean, I honestly don't know if he IS supposed to come off as naive like that or not, but that's what it feels like ngl :')

This all just my own interpretation and reading into things ofc, but I thought I might share this in case it'd be helpful to hear how someone else reads your character's personalities! Hopefully this doesn't come off as like, rude or something cause that's genuinely not the intention here 😭 (english is not my first language and sometimes the intended tone does NOT come through well whatsoever)

Idk how hard this could be to implement, but if possible, it could be nice for the first coupling ceremony to be completely randomised! I feel like that could potentially give it a much more natural feel considering the setting, and the fact that none of the characters know one another at that point

Yeahh I may or may not have read the entire Unraveled fanfic so that quote has its purpose ;D

since I don't have tumblr but still wanna join the Wanderer contest,,,,, 👉👈 I shall give you my Wanderer's design and throw in some random, extra images that describe his personality the best 

Oh, also. My dear Wanderer willingly took a selfie with a certain weirdo extraodrinaire so. do with that what you will.

simple mullet 🙏 

I really really realy love this, but I found that during the section where Masky and Hoodie find the player, it used the incorrect pronouns multiple times (she instead of he)

Genuinely can't wait for more of this game <3

edit: also wanted to add that the dialogue can be pretty confusing, it can be hard to tell in what order to read the text popping up