I wish I'd read more carefully. Dislike journalling games. This seems decent, though, for being a genre I dislike.
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The copy is the "what this game is" part. I think it'd be clearer if all that was in the rules, even if you need to add a page. The example might be better served if extended, or if you added other examples under the appropriate rules. A round by round, or die by die, example would add clarity. Or a video. Rules often read different than they play. I try to make any as a clear as possible. Economy of words is admirable, but not always in the best service of clarity. I should probably mention game design is my job, so I may be scrutinizing too much.
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