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It's an interesting concept. You have doing a great work, for the short time you have for work in it. I enjoy and like the mecanics, it's easy to play and that do it this type of game really softly for the player. The complement of the sounds and graphics are really good, and compenetrated. I think some elements in a graphic talk don't be the most correct. (For example the element for pas the day, it's a point of focus, when the player need to be concentrated with the program and the tasks zone). The tipography of the press, for more veracity i can search one more similar than the daily of the time ambient of the game. The colours and form of resalting the text, be cautious for not the "resalting" eat the text and lost the information. 

I think it's a nice story with a great potential. You have the opportunity for enlarge it, and do more situations. Or adding other employers with other histories. An a little idea for personal vision, can be interesting seeing a reaction of the character we lead. For example the little expresions of a games how Mario Party or Super Smash. Simple expresion a sticker mode can be a funny component, and if you like it, future merch.

I wait to see your next work! Congratulations and have very luck!