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Hi! So, please treat this story as a movie, the MC is not meant to represent anyone, she's her own character and you watch the story through her eyes, you can love her or hater her, she is NOT your self insert. I'm really sorry you couldn't enjoy the game at it's fullest because of this, thanks for playing regardless!

Yeah I tried to make her look a bit generic but keeping her MC vibe!

Thank you!!! And definitely there will be more options but not the way you think, I don't like adding meaningless options for stuff that seems irrelevant or unnecessary, I prefer to leave the choices to the minimum so they feel impactful! So there will be a few minor choices to make it more interactive but the BIG choices will be just to decide which route you'll do, and every route will be a big fully made and original story on it's own, so there won't be much branching or like 1582 possible endings...if there's 4 big routes, then there will be 4 endings type of thing 

Thank you so much for the advice! It honestly never occurred to me to do the exploration thing, and also I'm extremely new to coding so I had no idea it was even possible to do such thing! I'll do more research and see if I can learn properly and maybe integrate it into the full game!

God this is so sweet! Thank you so much for everything you've said it means a lot to me! Everyone has been very supportive and it makes me very happy that I delivered something that people enjoyed and that was worth your time! Thank you for your kind words! <3

Thank you so much for playing! And the MC is not customizable cuz she's not a self insert! She's just another character with personality and appearance, the objective of this VN was never to make a self insert but rather have the player as a witness of a story they can alter through choices! Okay for a little longer and maybe you might even like her!

Aww thank you so much you're a sweetheart!!! I'm so happy you liked it! (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

Oh my gosh SPELLING ERRORS?! I swear I used a spell check software and ran the script like 5 times to make sure everything was okay! English is not my first language so maybe you mean that's why some sentences might look kinda weird, I apologize!!!

I'm very happy you enjoyed the game nonetheless<3

oh woah that's probably one of the most detailed takes on the game I've seen so far!...I love it so much when players go so in depth with each little thing they notice and like, it makes me realize that people will understand what I'm trying to show with each scene!...thank you so much for your comment and for playing the game! and I fully agree on the NSFW thing, I'll make it all flow organically in the story because i want players to feel rewarded when they finnally get there! I don't want to do it just for the sake of drawing NSFW, i want it to feel important, special and relevant to the plot!

omg such a great comment!!!! haha thank you so much I'm so so soooo glad you liked it that much you have no idea! thank you for the compliments too! this made my day <3

Thank you so much really! It was really nice to hear you enjoyed your time playing it, and the compliments to the writing are also greatly appreciated! Because I have been drawing my entire life, but I've never written anything this big before...not leaving plot holes , connecting characters, world building and even making a good character are things I never thought I was good at! So thank you so much! I'm sooo glad you liked it and I really appreciate your kind comment! <3

Hello! yes it's completely fine!...I want everyone to have fun and enjoy the game! thank you so much for this and for playing it, ALSO REMEMBER if you clicked too fast and you want to see the dialogue you just missed, all you have to do is roll back your mouse wheel! it'll show the previous text!.... I'm really glad you liked it, and I hope your voice gets better! <3

Aww thank you! That's quite the compliment hehe I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Thank you so muchhhh! your support is very important! i'm so glad you enjoyed it and had a good time playing!

Oh the history thing is a good detail, i'll research how to add it! also if you want to read text that has already passed, you can roll back your mouse wheel on pc, or touch the "back" button on the quickmenu on the mobile version to see previous dialogue! and remember there's always the option to save your gameplay! that feature is made so you can save regularly and take it from there or replay the scenes you want!

Hiiii! thank you so much hehe I really appreciate it!

Hehe they really do, but I actually had planned somethimng like that from the beggining, so I wont discard it, it all depends on peoples opinion and reaction to the idea, if it's mostly positive, I might consider it...if not, well, I'll leave that to the fanartists!

Done! I sent you a message already!

Of course, DM me on any of my platforms like TikTok or X (Twitter)! 

thank you for saying this, i keep reporting and banning them ugh

Hey! of course!...I know you and I trust your work, I know you've done the same with The Freak Circus, Big Bad Dogs and other visual novels, so it's totally fine!

I understand why this might feel a bit frustrating, but it was very important for the story to move foward!...I just felt like the game had no options at all, and wanted to let know players that I am willing to use that feature, and don't worry, the demo is a linear story but once I make the routes, the options you choose will actually impact greatly on the plot!...this was just a little test to say "Hey, I know how to do it, and you can expect it to be on the full game!"

Thank you so much for your criticism, you points are totally valid and I'll definitely keep them in mind!... also regarding the text flow thing, you CAN go back haha!...in the Android version there's a button down on the quick menu that says "back" and it makes the text go to the previous dialogue, and in PC you just need to roll back your mouse wheel and it will go back as much as you want!...oh and also, to know when you can click, that's exactly why I added the little pulsing heart at the end of the text, once it appears, it means the text is fully over! If it doesn't, it means you still have to click cuz there's text left!...I guess I didn't make it very intuitive though.

Haha I'm sooo glad you liked it! And I really love players like you that like to analyze and watch closely because I LOVE doing stuff like little reactions or subtle moments than you later will be like "oh so that's why..."

And I really appreciate your kind words, I know this is just a demo and it's not a lot, but believe me I have big ideas and everything will get even more fucked up hehe... I'm just taking a little break to gather opinions, feedback and give some time to create a bit of a fanbase that can give me new ideas and help me with their theories! Thanks for the support<3

Haha I'm so glad you could play it finally! And that you enjoyed it that much seriously! Thank you for all the support! (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words, thanks for taking the time to play the game and leave this beautiful comment!!! <3

Thank you for your comment!...yes, it was kinda an illusion because I felt like it could be a good moment after an entire demo without choices, to let know players that I can and i will make use of the choice feature, since the game feels pretty straightforward, but I also need the story to go in that specific way for it to progress further!...I apologize if it felt frustrating and I totally understand, I'm relatively new to this so I'm just testing the waters a bit, I'll keep your comment in mind and will avoid making similar situations like this in the future!

Oh nonono it was not Miles!...Miles was sleeping with Eric's ex-girlfriend , and she found stuff on Eric's phone and told Miles, now he's using that against Sarah!

Yep, that's exactly it!

Such a BEAUTIFUL comment! Really I have no words to explain how much this means to me!... I've been working on this for so long that I was terrified of the public reaction, but I'm so incredibly glad and relieved my effort was noticed, and it's great to know people had a good experience with the game, seriously, thank you from the bottom of my heart! <3

I really appreciate such deep insight on the game! I'm so glad you were not disappointed! 

And don't worry, as I always tell people, the demo was just to set everything up, but you will have routes and options to stay with whoever you like the most! 

The story started with Miles since he's currently the closest to MC and I wanted Adrien to be introduced organically and finish with him! But they both will have the same treatment, care and dedication, I'll guarantee you that!....and yes, I prefer doing things in a straightforward way hehe I believe even sometimes it's just better to let the art and sound do the speaking instead of filling the space with unnecessary descriptions! Thanks again for playing!

You seriously have no idea of the great happiness this brings me...I feel so satisfied with myself every time someone comments something like this I just want you to know it does mean a lot to me and I did put my heart in every single scene you saw, and I'm so glad you noticed. Thank you so much, your kind words will forever be present in my head while working on this project!

Thank you! have a great day as well!

Thank you for your amazing comment!...the demo doesn't have much options yet because it's mostly a linear story to set the relationships and personalities of the characters! But don't you worry, I have planned 4 big routes and to increase a bit the ability to make various minor choices to keep it interactive, but this novel will be mostly defined by it's linear pacing and I'm striking for a kind of movie-like storytelling iykwim... I'll keep your feedback in mind and thanks a lot for playing the game and taking your time to comment! I was truly worried it was too short for a demo, glad to see it was a somehow satisfactory length haha!

Oh it's fine, really! I would never take personally something I can clearly see was not said with bad or hurtful intentions, in fact, this is actually the kind of feedback I desperately need! As a solo dev this being my first project means I have a lot of room for improvement, and there's no one better to teach me how to do it than the players themselves!... quick thing about the MC thing, I guess I was going for something similar to Homicipher, idk if you know that game, but it's also a visual novel with an established MC but the fact that you can name her makes it immersive without dismissing her character, I want a VN that has a main character, but that you can experience without breaking immersion which I have found is very hard to achieve cuz some people will love having an established MC and others will hate not being able to customize it, but hey, I must just accept that I can't meet everyone's expectations and tastes so I just did what I felt the best hehe ...also thank you for all your kind words and big compliments! They are extremely encouraging for me and gives me much more motivation when I see stuff that can be improved! I'll definitely keep in mind everything you've said, thank you!

Im so sorry about this, try to see if it's not you antivirus acting up! sometimes it blocks certain files specially itchio VNs for some reason.

Are you on PC or Android? If it's in Android you just need to download and then install it, it doesn't have virus or anything don't worry, if it's on PC you just extract it and run the file with the little icon!... I'm sorry I'm not of much help, I'm not an expert on tech support or fixing problems like these (⁠〒⁠﹏⁠〒⁠)

Aw thank you so much! It's very encouraging to hear such positive opinions! I'm so happy you liked it (⁠ ⁠◜⁠‿⁠◝⁠ ⁠)⁠♡

Haha thank you so much! I appreciate your support and hope you enjoy the game! <3

Hello! That's actually such great feedback and I feel I need to answer this in detail, so the necklace thing is something I have planned to happen organically, right now you have both since you're in "good terms" with both guys, but depending on which future route you'll choose, the MC will take off the one of the guy she currently hates....also the ability to stay or leave Miles is something you will have available to do also in future routes, I have 4 big routes planned, 2 for each guy, so if you prefer Adrien, you will 100% be able to set your boundaries with Miles and try to stay away (I'll say try cuz he's obsessed with you after all so you won't be able to just "get rid of him" completely, but you'll definitely be able to choose to hate him).......the MC doesn't feel like you because it is not really meant to be a self insert if you get what I mean, that's why she has pronouns and an appearance, you just live the story through her eyes....but I do understand that you see the story evolving kinda out of your control, and this is because there is no routes yet in the demo at all! Once you have the routes you'll have a few choices that will impact plot, but I must say it will not be a game with tons of choices, you'll have the option to choose routes and a few minor choices here and there, but you won't be choosing and picking stuff all the time......also the "feeling disgusted by Miles but love and need him" thing is just something I really had to do to set the mood, and make their relationship very clear for the players from the very beginning, once it's settled, as I said before, you'll be able to stay with him, or get away and go with Adrien instead!...thank you a lot for your criticism and I'll take everything very seriously! I really appreciate your time to comment and hope you enjoyed your time playing it despite everything!