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Thank you for the feedback! I will definitely work on clarity, especially with the feeling of time passing. Spelling and grammar will be polished before the final version ^^ 

All of the endings are a work in progress! thank you for noticing though, I'll keep this in mind when I'm working through writing them! ^^ 

I think this is a good point, that was one thing I was struggling with- just organizing things so that time as a concept in the game worked better. I will definitely use your suggestion with adding new dialogue and character options!

Yep, all the endings are currently work in progresses. There is a specific route that is harder to get to, but I needed to rework some of the writing to make it more satisfying ^^

This game is definitely a maze to get through- which makes it really satisfying to find out more. I like the world building and the mystery of the writing, and how long it takes to get to certain routes add to the suspense! 

This is such a cool game! I love the use of images as well as the changes in text, like with the text flashing or shaking. One issue is that there is no continuation after the red '1 reply' after clicking the 00014. There is also a option that is broken when interacting with the mail man, not being able to ignore him. I think there is other routes and options that lead to empty pages-

Overall I love the vibe of the game, and the polish and effects being put into it! 

I noticed some of the endings lack numbering- this makes me a little confused on the tracking and whether I received a ending or not. I kind of wish there was more consequences for not choosing to eat due to the hunger instead of simply nothing happening. 
Most of the choices are really cool, I like the simple interactions with different characters, and also the true ending of the story. That path seems the most developed, and is the most rewarding to get to! 

A cool game that brings awareness to people about the problems with trash being created. I like the theme of the game, and the images used! I noticed that every part of the game has a image besides for one bad ending. It'd be cool to have a image there too so all parts are consistent.