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Thanks for clarifying! Separating the practical choice from Mara’s emotional response is a helpful suggestion. We appreciate the example and the note about the scope of your test.

Thanks for checking it out! When you say a clearer indication of how choices affect the story, did you want more information before choosing, or a clearer summary afterward?

Thanks for playing! Glad Mrs Vale's request made the ending feel worthwhile. Was there anything you found confusing or wanted more of?

Thanks for playing and for the detailed feedback! The North Steps choice is a good point. We'll look at making it clearer that you can only pick one.

Hi everyone!

We made The Seventeenth Name, a short story game. You look for clues before the last ferry leaves, then choose what to do. It’s free and plays in your browser:

https://nexalabhq.itch.io/the-seventeenth-name

We’d love to know: Were the choices clear? Was any part boring or confusing? Did the ending make sense?

Thanks for playing!