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I gotta say, I laughed out loud when AM was part of the background visuals. The editing you've done does a fantastic job at making everything feel as chaotic as it should be, just like EM is feeling.

The parts where he's walking around, wanting to be nothing, contemplating whether he wants to live were poetic to me. I had to stop and appreciate them for a few seconds before moving forward.

Lmao I appreciate getting more context! It's interesting to hear about queer history like this! I'll give the calamus poems a read, for sure, thanks for the link :] 

That's so cool! I like how you subtly tie things together with that in mind! I don't read a lot of poetry, but is Whitman a favorite of yours?

Honestly, out of all I've read so far, nothing has had me squirming in my seat so much as reading someone perform surgery when they know they don't know what they're doing. Hhhhhooboy. You did great! Favorite visual detail is the way you did Summertime's eyes.

Even with all of its morbidity, I really appreciate that you end it on a note of defiance. May we continue to disobey to the bitter end!

I found this both parts horrifying and charming. I think the humor does a great job at adding to the surreal nature the writing! I especially loved the tension at the end of the black route, too. The music does a lot to cushion the horror in the first two routes, so having it cut out made it feel more "real", in a way. Banger song choice, too.

I'm glad he's relatable!! So, funny thing is, *all* of the characters are based on other fictional characters that I headcanon as transmasc... Otto is based on Otacon from Metal Gear Solid, but fused with Alphys from undertale, and I knew in my heart of hearts he'd be a fujoshi to the core from that, heheh.

I was expecting for this to be a fnaf-esque horror but I wasn't expecting how much this resonated with me, wow. The way you've integrated the gameplay with the story was very well executed! Admittedly I got a little misty-eyed at the good end, haha.

I don't think I can add anything that other commenters haven't already noted, save for the fact that I look forward to seeing whatever you make next!! This slaps so hard, I'm such a sucker for dark christian stuff.

This is fantastic!!! Just.... Wow! Excellent pacing, impactful storytelling, atmospheric use of sound... And I didn't even know renpy could do that whole "camera movement with the mouse" thing, that's a really lovely touch. I love Vetta... I hope he makes it.

Your pixel art is really cute! I also like the little pride lines for framing, that's nice and subtle.
As for what I'd like to see more of: Facial hair styles!! I didn't see any options that fit my own beard. 

This was super cute!! I enjoyed how the transition from normality to purgatory started out really subtle. Looking forward to seeing what else you make!

Capitalist furry dystopia? Body horror TF?? Transmasculinity??? I'm fucking sold, I really want to see where you go with this. Your art's gorgeous, too.

The music fits the writing so well, I have to really give you props there. It's short, but I'm finding it masterful in its simplicity. 
Nothing like a little violence to reignite that will to live, eh?

I feel your sentiment, as a dom/top tmasc myself. Their relationship is cute!  

If you ever make physical prints of this, I'd buy a copy. God.
The Little Mermaid was one of my favorite movies as a kid. It's...Kind of a trans movie, in its own way. But that aside, this art is so gorgeous, so professional. And knowing about clownfish protandry makes the worldbuilding feel very clever, too. 

I don't have context for Isopod Sounds but I think I need that shirt???? Lmao??
The mixed media art style is fascinating to me... I feel like it does well to convey the nightmarish nature of Ian's situation. And it is nightmarish... it hits close to home in a lot of ways. 

"I need to hold it together. I have to work and make money so I can get out of that house."<- Story of my life, brother. Great job. Looking forward to seeing this continue to develop!

Damn, I really dig with the vibe of this one... Pun not intended, haha. 

But seriously. This is a sweet little art piece, and I love the message. 

This is a really solid start! You've done a good job at making Jared suck and making Mackenzie empathetic... The parenting-writing is very on point, too. I loved the transformation sequence, and my favorite scene is the ren faire... Makes me miss attending.

Definitely looking forward to seeing the other transformation sequences! Feel free to hit me up on Fluxer if you want to collaborate on a bug route :p

I got 100 testosterones!!!!!!
Did you do all the pixel art? It's really cute! 

My favorite character is the gun, I think.

As a trans guy who's REALLY into anthro bugs, hairy as hell, and pre-top-surgery....This is good. He's just like me fr fr. Thanks for making this, it's so rare to see my exact body type in any sort of media.