this did a great job convincing me how hot it is to be absorbed into a busty slime woman, despite slimegirls not really being my thing in the first place, all while weaving in a concise and poignant story about what happens next after a rough coming out. really great mixing of this dichotomy of themes. utterly delightful!
cool mixed media 2d/3d look that works really well with the mecha setting, and some great music (in particular the rhythmic, dissonant battle music track, absolute banger). interested to see how y’all expand the story!
really appreciated how each character isdistinctly characterized through their dialogue style. annette’s evolving mental state, her realization of what’s happening combined with a kind of learned helplessness, is extremely compelling. a delight to read!
engaging premise presented with super cute art, and i found the whole story to be really concise and effective given the relatively short length. what a delight!
someone's gotta tell nines about the many-worlds interpretation, there could be a parallel universe where she really is just that lucky...
amazing art and writing, in particular the switching perspectives later in the story. and, god, the visceral detail in the last sequence made my neurons fire in the best way, absolutely choice writing. i loved it! extremely looking forward to the afterstory!
i am amazed by y'all's ability to situate a story and characters in very specific times and places, creating this incredible sense of subliminal melancholy that makes these characters feel so visceral. even though i have no idea how baseball scoring works, it was obvious the care put into the detail of all the little scoring diagrams throughout: the subtle differences between them, and the layers of meaning put into them all. absolute banger music tracks, also!
this left me utterly disoriented in the best way possible. the abrasive, vivid color palette, and fantastic ambient music make the whole work and especially the point-and-click sections such a uniquely unsettling experience. it made me go "what?" and "HUH?!" and "AAAA" repeatedly. incredible work!
