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The story was pretty good, to be honest, the art style is really nice, but I wasn't going to play it. But I read the comments, so I played it. Really, the story was amazing, a bit disturbing, but the narration was kept really well.

that was too dark, but i liked it

The game menu and start were pretty good, but the game was completed quickly. Sorry, I read later that this is a prototype; many elements can be added in its full version.

gameplay was really fun, not too much horror ,but really liked it

Every story has a character like Kiyo, nice, the way you manipulated the sprites and images is really good, and I really like your character style. It fits perfectly in horror or romance stories. I would love to collaborate with you someday

i liked that conceptual flow and the way the story was shown from that pov

ah too good, that was so dark

thats was so good, I wish this game were different from a visual novel too, it would be a lot of fun

i liked the gameplay this gave classic crime series vibe

i liked visuals

TIs there any BG artist? All my assets are ready, and I'm just looking for a background artist. I had one, but he hasn't been active for a long time, so I need a background artist, no matter what software they use.

I have tried 17 games of this jam so far, all of them were great but I will put this game in my favorite list

i just only want to say the game is very well, rich story, unique art, pretty beautiful backgrounds

that's pretty good game

Thank you for understanding the game well and giving the right feedback.

I do all the roles myself to make my game. 

I feel like I'm good at story writing, programming, and art, but I don't have any unique art style and I'm not satisfied with that

I am looking after someone who would make a visual novel together for this jam.

pretty good story

I really liked the story of this game, but it could have had a little more visuals, though it's a demo, still, the overall experience was pretty good. I really want to play its full version soon

This game is quite fun, especially the use of vector art in it gives the game an even better feel. Very few games like this are found.

Hey, I am a solo indie developer, so I make my games all by myself. I feel my specialty is programming because I have been programming for quite some time. I have also learned scripts for several games I have learned Godot and Ren'Py for visual novels, but I have made most of my games with the help of Ren'Py. I am good at story writing too. By the way, I am also a drawing artist and I make all kinds of art, but I don’t really know my own style. I also want a team so that I can focus on one thing and contribute to the team. If u like you can check out my games and see what you like, You will always be welcome

And if I talk about your story, it's actually pretty good; it has a combination of several themes and allows for many things.

This game is too awesome, the core idea is really good that force me to play this game. Good luck to you, hope your game will perform very well

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I’ll check it out!

Yes, late submission is allowed, but it shouldn't be more than 24 hours after the rating starts.

Okay, firstly publish your game, then i'll send a submission link. You can submit using the late submission link. Since the rating period has already started, please submit as soon as possible. Your game will be included under the same jam rules and voting period as the other entries.

I m glad to see that u have really fun with this

That's good. So what do u think

I really liked this game, I found all three endings and got all the achievements, it was a lot of fun

thanks u so much

i m glad u liked it

Amazing, this game was actually fun

The yandere route was pretty good, and I would like to see a character like Liz in more VNs.

i like it, keep growing

I thought good cinematography wasn't possible in a game, but you proved me wrong, it was really a great game

There’s only one ending in this, I thought there would be multiple endings. Anyway, the game was pretty good.

nice work

that is so good, pretty work

not too horror but the story is amazing

really pretty well game, nice 

What engine do you use to make your visual novels? If you use Ren’Py, that’s great for both you and me, since Ren’Py is one of the best engines for beginners. If you use Godot, that’s completely fine as well. However, if you use another engines, I may not be able to help as effectively.

Thanks u so much

When the game was finished, I changed a few things, like the name, because the game's theme was old, and the previous names seemed more modern.

thanks you so much