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cool concept! As someone else said, kinda makes me wish I’d gone more sci-fi with my own entry. I liked the Nerve Center set piece; I get to fight alongside a giant vat brain?? Also, I thought you did a great job of writing to an existing map. That can be really difficult if something there doesn’t quite fit what you have in mind, so really well done.

One minor thing - I would have liked a short bit at the front saying who the Diminished and the encephalons are - as it is, we don’t find out until room 7, but they are mentioned a few times before that.

Good work!

Yea, I bet! Do you think you'll expand it as a setting? I could absolutely tell you had more to say. Btw, did we play in Kraken Corpse Delve together at Between Two Cons? Your name seemed super familiar. Cheers!

Thanks for your comment! I've not done isometric maps before this one, so I'm glad to hear it works. Its definitely doing a lot of heavy lifting - it had to communicate everything about the connections between islands, because i would have had no space otherwise.

I really like your idea of giving the party a Council member and how you characterize each of them - seems like these guys are the kind of NPCs that parties will latch onto to. And their portraits are wonderful. Awesome work!

I love the NPCs in this so much. Really cool adventure!

I love the NPCs in this so much. Really cool adventure!

This is so excellent. Really enjoyable read and, as others have said, I love the combination of the art and choices in layout. 

Hey all. Just wondering if you've has gotten anything further regarding late submissions? I followed the instructions in that first email but haven't heard anything back yet. Just wanted to make sure I didn't miss something!

did you have any luck? I emailed my PDF in, but the thought of not getting community feedback is...heartbreaking 

I really like what you've done with the map! The small overlays of the indoor areas were a great addition. And that cover hits! Great work

Man, that is some high praise! Thank you for checking it out, i'm really glad you dig it. 

hey, thank you! i'm really glad you enjoyed it. There is a ton of interesting folklore about the leshy in real life, and there was SO much I wanted to do with him lol. Thanks for reading!

hey, thanks for getting back to me. turns out, i was completely jumping the gun. all is fine. new to Itch and thought I'd done something terrible lol. 

Hoping you see this in time. I've submitted my project and I see it in the Submission Feed, but I do not see it in the list of all Submissions. Should I be worried?