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I’m so late to discovering your work! You’re SO incredibly talented, I wish I found you sooner. I was hooked from the start and honestly couldn’t stop reading. I finished the whole thing today!

I’m incredibly moved by this story. The characters all feel like they have their own voices, and I found myself tearing up while loving all the heartwarming moments with Ursula. I like that your characters came from Wii Sports Miis^^

Your art style is so cool^^ It reminds me of oekaki, but it has such a unique identity of its own.

This is a truly splendid VN

I’m so impressed with the quality of this demo! It was honestly a great length, and you can tell so much effort went into it. I’m definitely no racing expert, but the story was told so beautifully. That last scene was quite something hehe, I’m SO curious to see what happens beyond the demo.

I loved Kleisinsky typing to Polyco in thru the terminal window ^^ The vast sky background really gives off a creator/god speaking to their creation aura~ Kinda divine and nostalgic like early 2000s PC wallpapers (´⊙ω⊙`)！！！

Polyco feels so emotionally needy yet human-like, she’s adorable and full of life, while Kleisinsky stays serious and grounded. Their contrasting views on humanity were fascinating: that clash between her innocent, hopeful AI idealism (like how desktop companions might idolize or worship their owners) and harsh human realism.

It’s so real tho…

This was an amazing read, so smart, emotional, and thought-provoking. Honestly, it will leave me thinking for days!!

I honestly screamed when I heard you two collaborated!! I love the nostalgic sprite work from dumbslime SM!! <3 Honestly thought this would be just a cute game cause I saw the thumbnail, but it went so far and beyond!! Peak media as always, 23noko！！！ Your writing is incredible. (⸝⸝⸝°꒳°⸝⸝⸝) <3

WOW, I’m speechless, and that this was both of you guys 1st VN?! This is incredible storytelling. I couldn’t stop bingeing on it like turning the page in a book.

I think it’s quite refreshing to read something lab-based, to do with postgraduate animal research + Yuri. The setting has some realism to it. Since I don’t have much knowledge of that field, it’s a lot interesting.

This made me feel so many emotions, from intense moments to hiding my face from April’s confessions/comments (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)

I found April to be quite likeable and a character I strongly connect with. There are situations I felt myself go through in life with similar conflicts! (´꒳`)♡

I’m so impressed with the overall aesthetic, really liked the scientific typography matching the credits and story I love it!! Look forward to seeing more from you all!! ヽ(★ω★)ノ

this is really cute;; i got around to trying it out today!! you really got the style for it^^ if you ever make more vns, i’ll love to see them hehe

OH MY GOOD NESS!!! I’m utterly amazed by the eerie, yet mesmerizing beauty of your game. The quality is truly exceptional, and I’m particularly drawn to the gothic horror aesthetic + atmosphere infused into your storytelling and art direction!! The UI choices, font and sound design are perfectly fitting. Loved the story, and found Sam’s pov an enjoyable and unsettling ride. I feel fortunate to have stumbled upon your work today <3

This was a nice Visual Novel to play, I liked the art, story and characters^^

I’m loving the demo <3 and so impressed with the amount of animations and artworks put into this! You’ve really captured the magical vibe vibe^^ The characters are interesting, I liked the funny moments too!

Beautiful story, love how it’s written and just finished it today^^

I really liked this and was engaged with the story^^ The art of Ignatius is very nice and he’s so pretty <3

!! I really liked this, the story pacing is great and the sense of humour too^^ I found Kara quite likeable and cute.

funny cute game^^

Beautiful I love vintage shoujo art, it's lovely to see in a vn game^^

This is so pretty ;; I love the storytelling a lot!!

This is really good, I love the atmosphere^^ and art style~

This was nice and spooky game, love the pixel artstyle it’s cute^^

Glad to know you like it, LOL yeah I ran out of time. Thank you for the kind words, I hope to come back to this once I finish writing up the story^^

It’s good to see a fellow visual novel creator and appreciator^^ It warms my heart to hear that the game reminds you of the style of horror-themed visual novels! YESSS, I’ve been getting into Umineko and Higurashi I love the game visuals. I will definitely look into adjustable text sizing. Thanks for taking the time to play my game and leave feedback!

OMG I absolutely LOVE this game, you guys did an amazing job! I finished the demo today and I can't stop thinking about how good it is. The story, characters are realistic, especially the MC who I find relatable and likeable. As a young adult myself I have limited time to pursue my dreams too and do late nights. The game does a great job of portraying challenges we all face. The range of love interests are great and I like how they're all talented but also good looking XD I'm excited to see how the story unfolds!!!

Thanks for the feedback, yeah there seems to be a lot of players experiencing some motion sickness. Hopefully the next game can be more easier on the eyes or have adjustable fov options. And that is great to hear you can access the game on your computer! That's the charm to making low poly games.

Hey BlackVoid,

Thanks so much for taking the time to write this feedback, a lot of the things you pointed out are in fact true. 

I do have to say that one thing in particular I'll have to look into more, would be those traps. Didn't realize, but should had known. They're hard to memorize, so one idea would be the surface of the tile disappears each time you fall in. 

I'll be coming back to this game to improve the quality, when I get the chance. Originally was going to slowly implement sounds to the game, but will consider those too.

Glad to see you caught on some of those influences, really makes me happy!

Wow I really like how you delivered the theme, I had a go at it today! I love how it switches perspectives, and the colours shifting monochromatic. I also got the chills when I reached the end, with the unsettling sounds and title screen :)