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Honestly, Sunny is my favorite besides Four, it's just so fun to see them care about the mc. Especially Sunny because it takes some coaxing for him to show that he cares, which makes it feel worth it :> (Also episode 5 was amazing, and I can't wait to see more dynamics and dialogue with the mc!) 

Reminds me much of the book the 7 husbands of Evelyn Hugo, but only narratively everything else is so unique and just as well crafted. I can't wait to see what comes next =>

Also I really enjoyed V's character, it's cool to get characters like him in roms 

Awwwww they're so cuute! And they were right, they balance eachother out =>

Yay! Can't wait to play it =>

And might I say poor Oswin ;-;, like maaan is my mc stressing him tf out and then big reveal! oml what this man is being put through alongside us is crazy. And I can't imagine how our fathers are going to feel, one moment it's a curse, an artifact and then bam a complete slap to the face. (also Aster why man, why, we had a good thing going)

Omg- This was not the direction I expected but don't I love it even more! I have so many routes to go through now it's insane ^^

Oooh this is going to be a really cute one, I can already tell :)

Yayyyy

I meaaaan Violo and Vivere are cute and nice the Stockholm syndrome got me lol

Oooooooh! This was so good and cool, and good! Everyone is just so likable and different and I just can't wait for more

Holy cow, that cliff hanger hit me like a truck! Like I came out of a heartfelt moment and then bam boom! Now I just have to play the full game after that! (Personally, I am really excited to see Lion's and Kie's routes, they're both just way too cute :D)

Damnnnn that cliff hanger-

No problemo, glad I could help :D

Oh, this story already piques my interest! Even right now, the characters are really well developed, and I can really feel the emotions of each one. The Nanny and the Guard characters are definitely my favorites so far. And I can't wait for more, as well as learning how the heir comes to be as a person :)

The only improvements I really noticed are some very minor typos, instances where the gender is incorrect (I'm guessing the default is for the heir to be a girl?), and a small section where a paragraph repeats itself before the baby's gender reveal.

Overall, this is a great start to a fun interactive fiction piece!

May I just say that this game is a masterpiece! Like omg I love it so much, and the voice actors are perfect for the characterss! And their dynamic is beyond cutee! I almost hunger for more, Great work :D

This cracked me up omg xD (so true though)

Ikr they're the cutest! And whenever Lawrence shifts (well more like bounces in embarrassment lol) Vale looking over to check on him drives me nuts! It's just way too cuteeee aaaah