Honestly i wish other vn devs admitted their earlier mistakes in writing and went back to fix them like you, this is really cool!

ANOTHER NIKKO VN LESS GOOOO

Thank you!! I wanna buy it for my boyfriend he loves the visual novel :3

NOOOO A CLIFFHANGEER

Also idk many book titles so is ''Open Maw'' referencing Open mouth the playful trilogy or Open Throat the queer novel?

Yes and it is good that this type of relationship dynamic is shown, if all literature were only good healthy relationships we wouldnt be able to recognize them irl. There is a sadistic charm to seeing tragic unhealthy relationships and removing them completely is just ignorant. 

Despite the critic of this route I must say I like where it is headed

Relationship like Haruki's and Yuuichi's are not uncommon and as someone who experienced this type of stuff I must say you have done a great job of potraying it. After reading your patreon's feedback message I trust you will continue with Haruki's route as you intended to. 

I think a lot of visual novels these days are all very similar and a relationship like this is something that should be more explored. It reminds me a lot of Burrows by Nikko, taboo's like these should be explored more and talked about rather than every relationship to be the same with minor differing problems.

Good job Haruki is still my fav character from Tennis Ace :3.

YES BJORN!!!!!!!!!

Honestly this made me come back to reading vn's again, really well written, enjoyable thanks to the skills and origin mechanics. I wish you good luck with writing more chapters and i will be reading them :3

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I LOVE YOU

Bjørn

UR THE BEST!!!!

YES HARUKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Me desperately trying to find Alvy´s outfit online (pls is that a jacket or a flannel??)

(just read its a jacket, IM GONNA FIND SOMETHING SIMILAR TO IT)

YESS my lovely bear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Also 35 kroner for a shirt and pants? Tell me the name of the thrift shop godamn.

Crying while writing this, i love this vn so much.

I love ur songs!!! i wanna learn how to play maybe on a guitar.

Loved the new chapter and the combination of backstory and present! Also The new song is awesome! Keep up the good work! Btw is Mylo's surname a reference to Dan Kuso? I always thought hearing Baxter call Mylo Russo sounded similar.

Love your voiceeeeee!! downloaded the songs on my spotify and listening to them everyday! Hope there will be more songs later on in the story.

Personally i like them because these characters feel more serious, before mikko looks like a little cute guy in the new sprite he has this serious vibe around him. I think they look more mature and i like that.