I honestly don't even know where to start; this work is simply incredible. You took all the expectations and ideas I already had about this game—back when there were only a few translations available—and elevated them to such a level that now I really want to see your other projects, especially Lonely Wolf Treat 1 and 2. Now, regarding the narrative and my thoughts on each character—even though I haven't played your other games yet:
Timber – Someone sarcastic and playful, yet deeply caring about others, even if he doesn't always show it outwardly. I really saw a lot of myself in him lately :P
Tundra – A very brusque person, but also very kind. I honestly understand why she’s like that; to me, she seems to have a more broken soul than Timber or anyone else in the story. She reminds me a little bit of my mom—minus the part about losing a husband, of course :3
Twigs – Very innocent and cute—up to a certain point, that is >:) . But out of all the characters, he seems to be the most helpful, supportive, and charismatic (after Timber, obviously :P ). He reminds me of a part of myself from when I was younger; he's so cute, I just want to squeeze him :3
Plum—I felt a bit sorry for him T-T; he seemed to like Timber but never stood a chance—kind of sad, really—but Twigs is better anyway :P
Osmath (I don't remember how to spell his name, so I gave him this nickname :P)- A horrible human being; the only reason I don't hate him too much is that he didn't appear often and, in a way, just did what Senbei asked.
Senbei (The devil incarnate)- I hate this guy. I’d kill him with my own bare hands if I could, and even then, I don't think I'd be satisfied >:(. He’s a horrible, selfish, disturbed, and sadistic person—everything bad you can imagine. I suppose that was the point, seeing as he’s the story's main villain, but I still hate him with every fiber of my being >:(.
The other wolves (Sorry, I don't remember their names besides Juniper ;-; )—They’re so cute, especially Juniper; she’s very playful and reminds me a lot of my late dog. It was fun imagining Juniper as my own beloved pup :3.
My assessment of the game's aspects:
Story-9/10. It’s a very interesting story with many fun, dramatic, and slightly terrifying moments; it’s very deep and conveys a wide range of emotions. I’m only giving it a 9 because OneShot already holds a special place in my heart, and because of Senbei—I hope he doesn't show up in LWT 1 and 2 , I hate him >:( .
Art - 8/10. It’s a simple style, yet very beautiful at the same time; the drawings seem to convey so much emotion. I really wish I could draw like that :) .
I think I’ve said everything I wanted to about the game.
I know it’s a long write-up, but I’m sure there’s plenty I forgot to mention because of my bad memory :P .
Please excuse any writing errors; English isn't my native language, so I had to use a translator to post this comment. I’m just a young Brazilian with a lot of free time who stumbled upon this wonderful game :3 .
If you’re still undecided about whether to play it or not, let me tell you: ABSOLUTELY YES—YOU NEED TO PLAY IT >:) .
I think I’ve rambled on a bit too much, so I’d better stop here. It’s getting late, and if I keep writing, I might not finish for another two days :P .
Huge thanks to the game's creator—you reminded me why playing Visual Novels is so great. I wish you all the best :3 .
Signed, R — a huge fan now :3
Here’s a photo of my second 100% game save; I’m going to keep it safe :)
Obrigado por esse jogo maravilhoso e a tradução em português :3
