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This sounds pretty interesting, I'd like to help out. I'm primarily a 2D illustrator, so I could help out with the concept art and UI design. I have some examples of UI and other art I've done for games I made on my website
https://www.sapphireflash15.com/portfolio

I'm trying to come up with game concepts that people would be interested in, this is the first one I've thought up

It's called: "Your Best Friend Lives in the Backrooms."

You find an entrance into the Backrooms. While exploring it, you came across a girl unlike any other you've ever met — and become fast friends. Before long, you both start spending most of your free time together.

But one day, something changes. And now, she doesn't want you to leave.

Thoughts on the idea?

Yeah I hope they do too. I choose twine because I like telling stories and it didn't seem super complicated. I actually made this game with Harlowe because it said it was super simple, but I kinda regret it now because it's kinda too simple

Lmao I hope the art is good, my background is originally in visual art. Also funny enough making video games has been a more recent thing for me; the last game I made before this was like back in highschool, and it didn't involve pictures at all. But yeah art and writing and sound can all help to create a strong atmosphere in a game which is especially important for horror stuff in genre.
Also I like, really wanted to make this game good. The idea behind this game originally started out being a fanfiction for this one vtuber I watch, and it just sort of morphed into its own thing. I plan to tell the vtuber about this, so if they play it on stream (which is a big maybe) I'd want it to show that I was, well competent. 

OMG lol I totally didn't realize that was still in there! I put that in there to test some stuff — the word didn't have to be piss specifically I just do that to humor myself. But thanks so much for the comment and compliments! The art took such a long time to do too — like twice as long as everything else

Thanks for your feedback! I've fixed the problem with the dining room, and I'll be sure to go through the game again and find the spelling mistakes you're talking about. 
I wasn't able to replicate the problems you had with the sound and full screen mode. It might be a problem with the web browser — which kind of web browser are you using?
Also what about the ui is puzzling in particular? I know it's a bit unique — I wanted to be a bit different with it — but I'd still be interested in hearing your thoughts so that I can know how to improve for future projects.

Suggestions, bugs found, or just anything you might've found while playtesting the game