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rygelxvi

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A member registered Jan 05, 2024

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I enjoyed that this lets you build your character so much. And wish you the best with the work, eagerly looking forward to more of it in the future.

That said I have one small issue to raise. I was playing V0.05.01PR so this may already have been addressed. In which case appologies for the repeat bug report.


Day 1 after the first bridge duty, I had Rael hang out with Mizz and learn more about them. Mizz revealed who their dad was and his parents/his link to gaming as a family before fixing the gamesoft for them.

It then feels odd that on Day 5, when I got an "Event" conversation with Mizz after hanging out with them in the gym. That Rael says "I don't even know who your father *is*." Given that it was kinda a big deal on Day 1 and had Rael calling Mizz royalty it seems wrong to have forgotten that in the intervening days.

Very descriptive, and good sentence length, breakup and pacing, but perhaps a little over-flowery.
Comes across as more a storyteller talking, retelling of an old epic, than the sort of story that this usual for this medium.

Very descriptive, and good sentence length, breakup and pacing, but perhaps a little over-flowery.
Comes across as more a storyteller talking, retelling of an old epic, than the sort of story that this usual for this medium.

Theme is clearly addressed. 
Deals seriously with serious issues.
Usually nice/suitable BG music, although at the end I think there could be something more fitting.
Dialogue felt generally believable if a little too horny/flirty, even if some of that can be forgiven in the setting/circumstance.

Thank you kindly for the update. <3

Ty for the update. Finding out Almond was using his magic for naughty during the bow training. XD

Although this page shows the pc-zip as existing, the downloads page currently only shows mac/android.