Just ran this and it's one of the best written trifolds I've seen so far!
Incredible things in no particular order:
- Well structured objectives with very real dangers and natural exploration progression baked in to them
- Small cast of interesting characters with clear motivations that makes running them (and their charred versions) super fun
- The paths forwards are simple to understand and easy to improv around
- Robust enough to improv small details on the fly (I added a shotgun... But now both sides have a shotgun)
- The horror elements come through naturally
5/5 great job- please keep writing.



