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Looks like AI big time. i found this in the NO AI tag also. whats up with that? 

good grief, did you want a cookie for it? 

im really enjoying this game but i lost an island due to having meat, a "prohibited item." is meat prohibited on all the islands? i cant find anything that says whats prohibited on each islands, i didnt even know that was a thing.

i fear you and i have very different ideas of right and wrong 

shrug. my other points really still stand, the length and single arrt piece wasnt really a deciding factor for how i feel, more the lackluster writing. it felt more like filler rather than pointing at or implying any deeper story or meaning, and for a single pic VN, i was hoping for at least somewhat compelling dialogue.... it is absolutely possible to have interesting story and dialogue in less than 1k words.... and the MC sounding like a child added an unfortunate unpleasantness that could have been avoided imo.

i wont lie this game actually really disappointed me. it has such an interesting concept yet does essentially nothing with that concept. theres only like... . one piece of art in the game, which is a bit dull, but that can be amended with compelling writing and dialogue. this VN did not do that. there's virtually no story, no interesting dialogue, and im really not fond of how the MC sounds like a little girl. i was really caught off guard by the MC sounding like a child, really not a fan of that and it kind of made me uncomfortable in a way i was not expecting lol. 

there is so much that could be done with this type of plot. very very lackluster experience that i feel would have been a waste of my time if the idea of a captured Yandere hadnt inspired me to create my own characters and story with the same concept.  theres that, at least.