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thx for the updates, I havent played the last 3 immidietly so it was quite the experience how the story kept developing further and further than I ever expected esp. the ending of Chapter I. It is quite the journey and I can´t wait to see it continue.
Although if I may suggest, while I am always happy to see another story update, maybe it wouldnt be amiss to go back and fix up somewhat frequent mistakes in the chapter I ? There are often wrong colors on dialogue or the often occuring visible  </span>, leftovers from coding, It is not something that stops u from playing it just ruining the immersion somewhat, although there is one bigger error s where maybe a bug that stops continuation, see image below
where if choosing specific order of options ends up locking u without ability to continue not sure If I can provide perfect description, but it I could replicate it, it starts about about turn 86 where are the choices : "Study at library, Talk with Yasmin and Try transforming in your room", when chosen first Study at library, then either resonance or soul followed by "Stay in your room" it then with either option on skirt ends without way to continue turn 92 (if the study at library, talk with ... chosen in different order no problem occurs weirdly. And bit of praise in the Chapter II so far the all above mistake seem less comman or non existent other than few duplicate lines, misspellings or missing cursive for telepathy. 
I apologize for rambling like this, I dont want to make it sound like I am only complaining but I think the mistakes do really add up to lessen the experience a bit. Either way, once again thx for updating and writing the game, I having blast reading/playing it, Keep up the good work

Now that´s a light novel title if I ever read one

Omg that ending in 0.0.8.2 is such a huge tease, cant wait for it to continue, although are u planning making some changes to the date part? So far it seems that even if we choose any body for the finishing of tier 0 orientation we always get the clone 04-H from descriptions that follows. Bit of lost oportunity to have MC react bit diff in each of the bodies. Either way thx for the update looking forward to the next and many further ones.

I almoust couldnt believe it when the status of the game turned to Completed. Congrats on finishing the game it was enjoyable ride. Although the choice for song at the end is just diabolical. Thank you for the game and for your efforts for last 3 years on developing it

ok wow, I didn´t expect much going in but I can say I was pleasantly suprized.  So far game delivers solid introduction into the world and what we can expect from future releases. UI is clean, so far no obvious bugs, though maybe it woulnd´t hurt to slightly increase size of space for text/dialog in regards to the whole layout. Def looking forward to playing further updates

seems a bit short even for an early version, but so far seems it will be worth playing once it gets rolling with the story and playtime

Thank you so much on making that decision of spending extra 80$ on that one picture on Britney´s route in the roleplay session. It was so worth it. Also congratulation on the 4th anniversary as well as your B-day though after reading the special intro and 4th wall break "side story" I am totally lost for words and all I can say is thank you for sticking though it all and continuing working on this passion project of yours for yoursef, for the community or other reasons you might have . Best of luck and health to you Cap

And thanks from me for listening to feedback. Now I am looking forward to the final version even more

Nice little game with nice art. Bit repetitive as goes the performing of daily tasks but they serve for the purposes of the story advancing forward and the TF elements. Just one minor thing I have seen that the final update is coming close as mentioned in the dev, log but would it be still possible to change that only way to get magic is to fornicate with male friend of the witch or some male resident of the town ? Possibly enable it through lesbian encounter or bringing back the killed futa familiar of the witch ?

Either way I am looking forward to the next update

Just replayed the game on the 0.16.0 version specifically the mom route (playing on Trans stats) with the new content and sprites and I must say it had a overall nice feel to it so good job.

I at first thought that I wouldn´t play any other route than Britney from lot of versions back which has since been my favourite (yes I tried Keisuke but just nope nope nope and not just from it being the "straight" route but also the way it feels forced on Z and Keisuke going from best friend to unberable frat boy) but the mom route opened up a new angle/solution to the story advancing in new way and I am here for it It has really nice and well written internal dialogues and the reconecting of mother and child with your style of writing and interesing characters will definetly become really enjoyable.

For what is so far it seems like a very cute and wholesome story which I am looking forward to playing after its completion. 

Positives:

cute and well done art

psychological side of MC prob accepting themselves as story progresses further

simple story which is fine for visual novel such as this one

Negatives:

as already mentioned by holograph the occasional voice lines that do not even fit the written text feel kinda out of place

instead of those if you want to keep the voice acting just simple  gestures/sounds would I think suffice more than enough like a voices of characters laugh, grunt, cry etc. 

Either way the game is good and I would like to play it finished someday

just few missed EN translations (after prologue where you can start freely move on ship in the morning when asking the captain questions MC answers on one in his head and it is missing translation, and the Elisa´s spell description of lesser cleansing  is missing EN as well