Your piece is beautiful! It absolutely captures the tone of both the image and the conceptual text. The flute part and the synths especially immersed me in the spirit of the piece. If this how it sounds with a late start via ear injury, I'd love to hear the whole thing! :)
Thanks! I'm really happy I'm not the only one who found the image so compelling in its sombre implications, with the half-faded figure by the girl's side and the abstract beauty of the world. It's a relief that I succeeded in treading the fine line of loneliness, as you said, since this is my first time creating songs for a broader theme instead of just for myself.
Thank you for this feedback! This is my first composing jam, so I was quite nervous about submitting for it. I'm especially glad the emotions I went for resonated in some capacity. Hopefully next time I'll be able to write more songs.
