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Hi ^^. I'm Suki, one of the streamers of visual novels participating in this amazing Feedback Quest 8! This game was the first to play on the stream. I didn't feel the hour I spent playing this game. The story itself is easy to follow, alongside with fun characters like the boy and girl who show up in the beginning, creating a good chemistry between them.

Furthermore, the gameplay itself is very intuitive, I didn't feel uncomfortable playing the game to face to the foes. The art and animations in the characters makes more immersive the story, and the backgrounds made me feel uncomfortable at the beginning but attracted for the mystery behind of that.

-Graphics; 9/10

-Gameplay Mechanics: 9/10

-Soundtrack: 8/10

-Story: 9/10

Hi ^^. I'm suki, one of the streamers of visual novels participating in this amazing Feedback Quest 8! The game has its own pace in the way to develop the story, and to tell how is a character, their feelings, thoughts and so on. But one thing I felt a little out of place was... the music background. The music background for the menu was good, but when you play the story, for several lines there is no a melody to emphasize the moment or the context... it's just silence.

By other hand, the design of characters, and scenarios caught my attention. I really enjoy seeing the art^^. 

Today on stream I played color fear ^^. Well, I felt really scared haha. The jump scares and the sounds are fine. I think the mechanics for the gameplay weren't very intuitive to follow (at first I couldn't understand how to follow the colors or to interact with the arounds) but I'll give another try ^^, the mystery is really interesting and the concept is weird but catch your attention on how gloomy is.

-Grpahics: 9/10

-Gameplay Mechanics: 7/10

-UI: 10/10

-Soundtrack: 10/10

-Jumpscares: 11/10 ^^ (For a moment I was really scared, I played at night alone and with no light, just the screen of the computer)

I played the game in the first day of streaming on my channel. Here my feedback of 60 minutes: 

-Art: 9/10 I found cute the design of animals, the forest design, in general was good.

-Soundtrack: 9/10, I felt excited running away from the obstacles (I won't say anything due of spoilers hehe)

-Writting: 10/10, The story is original, engaging at first, characters with a good humor. I didn't feel something out of place or something unnecessarily long with the writing. It's fine as it.

-UI: 8/10 The UI is simple, and very intuitive to use in the game (main menu) and where you choose the different stages.

-Gameplay and buttons: 8/10 Maybe at first I felt a little weird to play and move the camera, but with the time you get used how to use the key arrows and the mouse to move around the map and to select options.

I really enjoyed the game, please ^^ continue developing this game, I think it has potential.

I played the game in the first day of streaming on my channel. Here my feedback of 50 minutes (I will continue playing the game ^^):

 -Art: 9/10: The use of AI level up the quality of the game. Maybe there are some artist that think of this as a negative issue (and I understand very well that part, due I work with an artist to reach new commissions) but there are other artists that consider the AI as a support tool to make creative designs in a better level, or improve some things, and I think you made this game really amazing in visuals and you were creative, I don't see a use of AI here, I see the use of AI as a support tool and a human creativity leading this project.

-Soundtrack: 9/10 I'm a fan of classical ost like Canon and new ones that express the feeling of nostalgic, the romance, the normal living and how the little things of life has a unique value. 

-Writting: 9/10, The writing style is really easy to follow, and I think all the interactions, moments, spaces, the silent are fine in the way to tell the story.

-UI: 10/10 It's the best part, I found the UI really creative in the way to show the characters, the options for music, the gallery. 

That's my feedback. I'm looking forward to play more games like this ^^.

Here my schedule:

• Tuesday and Thursday: (9:30pm to 10:30pm GMT-5)

My channel YT: YT Suki Novels

I'll send a post if my schedule changes for something else ^^.

Hello! It's me, Suki. A male vtuber streamer of visual novels. I have a channel in Youtube where I share gameplays and some projects of translations. Sometimes I make reviews of visual novels as well, where I try to analyze the story, interesting facts and background about the development of the game.

It's my first time being part of this event ^^, and I'm a little nervous about how it will be going. My native language is Spanish, but I can speak English as well, so I'll do my best and thank you so much for having me ^^.

Time Zone: GMT -5

My main channel (YT): https://www.youtube.com/@suki_novels

Twitch: https://www.twitch.tv/sukinovels/about

Muchisimas gracias Kathis64 por el gameplay subido. Puede que haga una mini reacción en mi canal sobre el video ^^.

Una vez más, aprecio el tiempo dedicado a esta mini demo.

Dura unos minutos, no es muy largo de momento, y aprecio la intención de querer jugarlo. La demo está incompleta, no he incorporado finales, y no te tomará mucho tiempo. ¡Ánimo con la demo!

Que tal ^^. Me alegra mucho que hayas probado la demo, de momento estoy planificando eso. Y gracias por el comentario, pronto lanzaré una nueva versión del juego.

¡Hola TempestDahlia! Me alegra mucho que haya probado la demo y haya sido de su agrado. De hecho tiene razón, muy pocos proyectos son creados originalmente en español con el género de Visual Novels. Estaré checando su proyecto de Visual Novel ^^, y que genial con el tema del parche en español.

Acogeré la recomendación, para distinguir de mejor manera quienes participan en los diálogos y sea menos confuso al momento de la lectura, y muchas gracias de verdad, por el comentario, pronto se agregará el resto de la historia con la ayuda de Ferch y se harán los cambios respectivos.

¡Un saludo!

I loved this VN, it's the first time I play  a VN with a manga style, in the beginning I felt a little weird (due to the game format) but I enjoyed a lot every scene and page of the game until the end...

By other hand, the art and animations looked nice, they gave them a special touch in the way to telling the story, and the music I found really emotional and fun according the scene.

Finally, about the writing I found really interesting and enjoyable with a touching story. ^^ Amazing work.

Hello!, I'm Suki, a translator (English-Spanish), I was reading the VN (I liked it) and I would like to help for translation to Spanish. Don't worry about the cost... I'm doing it for free. This is my email: sukinovels@gmail.com.

¡Perfecto! , podemos manejar el resto de detalles por medio de correo (sukinovels@gmail.com) y empezar con la traducción.

¡Hola Ketrixgames! soy Suki_Novels, me interesó mucho la novela para mobiles, me preguntaba si es posible ayudarte con una traducción al inglés, (sin costo). 

Y excelente trabajo por el desarrollo de la VN, muy creativo.

Muy divertido el juego, con una temática única.

Really, thank you so much for this asset, this helped me a lot because I was worried about how to draw characters

Thank you so much for this resource