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Thank you for the thoughtful response! Branching and content is always going to be the hardest aspect of solo development and I’m impressed with the amount and quality of content already present. A different approach to sex scenes could always go in the next one, after all.

I had a lot of fun with this! I thought that you used language well to establish and maintain a consistent tone; I can’t think of anything that dispelled the story’s illusion offhand. The pacing worked well for me because it seemed like I could tell the difference between scene-setting passages and gameplay (for lack of a better term) passages without the seams being overly obvious. I don’t think that it would take nearly as long as two hours to read this without distraction or hunting for every single thing hidden in the parser.

Regarding the sex scene: it didn’t feel like an abrupt departure from the rest of the story, which I would consider a positive mark. I personally would have liked kinkier options - a whole tailor’s shop presents no opportunities for the lovers to tie each other up? I can’t intentionally kneel or crawl or beg? - but that has nothing to do with the quality of the writing. It was still very sexy!

That makes sense. Assets are generally the most costly part of adult game dev. Anything you can do in the direction of more gender options would be appreciated.

Very cute! Any plans for a male sub sprite (or even better: selectable genitalia and breasts)?