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So I finished it. The humor is definitely on point, and Alfrodam is incredibly cute (plus a big, intimidating, muscular, helmeted, evil overlord who's also submissive is a terribly underrated idea. Seriously, why isn't that more common smh?) He also seems to be more of a "soft" kind of evil than a hard kind? Like, yeah, he'll brutally slaughter his enemies and he's invading a kingdom for unclear reasons, but he seems to be a somewhat decent boss if his relationship with Stolid and the comment about compensation to his fallen soldiers' families is any indication. It's good, it works for this kind of story.

I also really like Stolid's narration and perspective, but it feels like it takes until the second scene for his personality to really be established. It's mostly in the narration of the first scene which, while funny, is a little too quippy and is at odds with his later characterization as someone a bit more dry. But other than tiny little nitpick, I really did like him and I think his level of devotion to Alfrodam is really sweet. (Also he's an orc, which is always a plus.)

As for Kawaji, he's um... he's alright? There doesn't seem to be much to him beyond being a himbo isekai protag and I get that he's a parody character, but next to the more colorful Stolid and Alfrodam he's more than a little one-note. 

I know it's probably not your plan but if you expand this into a full visual novel I would actually rather see a romantic relationship develop between Alfrodam and Stolid. Their talk in the last scene is really cute, and I half-expected by picking the "it's quite sexy" dialogue option for Alfrodam to send Kawaji away so that Stolid could be the one to fulfill Alfrodam's desires but I totally get if that isn't the kind of vibe you were going for.

But yeah, great start and I'm curious to see what y'all are planning to do with the full thing. (Quietly prays for Alfrodam getting tied up too.)

The UI is crisp af. It's kind of weird how neat and clean it is, especially when compared to the rough draft of the background.

This isn't like, a bad thing, it's just the first thing I noticed.

Will have more comments after I finish it.

D. I'm more interested in the inevitable train wreck when it gets released and isn't everything the people who overhyped themselves to high heaven built it up to be.

Where's the save data stored on PC?

I hope you're doing okay. Even if this never gets continued what we have here is really fun.

I guess keep the idea in your back pocket for a future game then! 😉

I'm not Supermage, but I'd suggest perhaps a way to "quarantine" visitors by tying and gagging them for a night? Just for those cases where you aren't sure who's bad or not. 

...This would probably necessitate art of the guys bound and gagged to go with it though, and I'm not sure how much work that would be for you.

Ah, good old biphobia... how lovely. /s

I absolutely loved my time with this game. It's really fun. My only complaints are the lack of a gallery system so we can see what scenes we have yet to unlock, and not being able to save during dialogue scenes. Other than that, it's fantastic and I can't wait to see more!

I definitely think that switching to larger overworld sprites is a bit of a mistake tbh. Just in the screenshot you posted, Grove looks absurdly taller than everything else around him. To make it look good you'd have to change the scale of EVERYTHING, not just the character models. Really, you should stick with the shorter, simpler sprites, if for no other reason than saving yourselves a LOT of unnecessary busywork. 

A decent start. I'm curious to see where this goes.

Media Literacy is still dead I see...

Please tell me there will be like actual endings for each monster once they've left the room. I want to actually knight Sir Knight outside the hotel like we promised. He's such a sweetheart once you manage to break past his rough (and homicidal) exterior!

Finally checked this out after loving Temptation's Ballad last year, and I have to say, Euca is probably my favorite VN protag yet. He's so delightfully unhinged, and he's not a total dumbass or wimp either.

I really liked Alex's content and story! He's such a sweet guy, I was really hoping his questline would lead to it's own unique ending and I'm sad it didn't. :( 

I'm a little disappointed him making us his assistant doesn't lead to anything after the questline is done either. Feels weird that we can't continue to help him.

Any plans on updating this?

I like big bottoms personally. Perhaps giving us a choice instead would be better.

I'm missing two memories, the "a spider's warning for the wandering fey" and the  "you feel the urge to rest near streams, rivers, lakes" one. How do I get them?

Playing the Windows 10 version. On startup it says "Can't parse file /Resources/Audio/g" and then it crashes.

Edit: Nevermind, the problem was with my computer, a restart fixed it. However, when I start the game now, all I get is a black screen with a small white dot in the top left corner.

I noticed the selection screen has 6 empty slots.

Might I request a Yautja (from Predator) get added to the roster? 

Will we be getting a bit more diversity with the aliens in the future? So far of the characters introduced only Skru'Vaks is really alien. The rest are just humans with weird skin colors and a few extra bits. I was hoping for something and more like Star Wars, Mass Effect, or Ben 10 where the aliens look truly alien.

Sorry if I'm coming off as whiny. I am enjoying this game so far. I was just wondering is all.

An nice start. I'm especially looking forward to the bondage content. 

Will there be aliens too?

No worries. Take your time.

Will you be updating this for 0.2?

So... I just finished the scene where we first meet Agatha and... um... 

Spoilers and Wild Mass Guessing below:

Is... is Cole actually Marrow AND Hamish's biological kid and not just Marrow's? Because ngl, I was kind of enjoying the whole "you're not my real dad" dynamic Cole had going with Hamish and making him Hamish's biological kid kind of ruins that. It's a fairly cheap way to resolve the conflict in Hamish and Cole's whole sort of "son not liking his step-dad" relationship and opens up a number of rather uncomfortable questions. Like, why wouldn't Marrow and Hamish just TELL Cole this when he was younger? Cole makes no secret of the fact that he thinks of Hamish as "Dad's killjoy boyfriend" instead of "Dad #2" and it makes Marrow out to be a really shitty partner if he didn't step in and clear this matter up for all these years. I just can't see Marrow doing that considering what I've seen of him.

Basically, I hope I'm wrong and just overthinking things. There's clearly something magical about Cole's origins based on what Agnes said, but what is still unknown and I really hope it isn't what I think it is.

I got to the scene where the trio have lunch with Sidd's mom and I want Ilia to adopt Artemi and pull out that broken bottle on Katrina.

...Holy crap. A gay nsfw Furry VN that happens to have a female protagonist! (Or, one of the protagonists at any rate.) I never thought I'd see the day!

Just so people who aren't in the discord are aware, the next update is planned to be out around December 15th. Might be a few days before or after, but that's the date they're shooting for.

Um... where is the CG gallery?

It's always disappointing whenever a masked character's face is revealed and Bread is already cute enough that we don't need to see what he looks like!

So I want to complete the lizard vs bull war questline as perfectly as possible: get Thane's ending, save the spy, stop Axel from hanging the three lizards, and getting Nauxus to like you enough to date you, but looking at the guide it's impossible to achieve that because no matter what I do, I won't have low enough suspicion with Axel to convince him to spare the lizards or low enough suspicion with Nauxus to get him to date me. Is there something I'm missing? Is my math wrong? 

This is pretty much the only M/M nsfw game out there that's focused on bondage content and I am so happy that it exists!

Yeah, the white disclaimer screen is also like that.

Yeah it's Windows 10, but the computer is less than a year old.

I've got a problem. Whenever I open the game the visuals look like this: 

The fact that you actually listened to our criticisms in this instance has earned you my immense respect. It takes an honest writer to be willing to admit when they've messed up and fix it.

That bitch Komoli should be sacked. Not only did she imprison Killigan against his will, she tried to screw over Mac's graduation by giving him an exam in something that NOT EVEN THE HEAD HYDRONETICS INSTRUCTOR knew a lot about.