Played through the game and absolutely loved it. I like the mechanics, the story lines are pretty decent for the build so far, and the character models look great!
Im not sure what the scope of the project is in terms of when this game is complete (in the eyes of the creator), but I have some good ideas for next steps.
Longevity
The game takes roughly 2-3 hours to complete while also messing around and trying stuff out. Making rent higher and more punishing would hone the focus on making money to progress. Selling a ballgag covers rent for the whole week. Incentivizing the premise (broke girl trying to make rent and is willing to dip her toes into depravity to do so) is a great start.
Customization
The kink in this game is BDSM, having more restraints such as rope, tape, leather, and metal would enhance the theme. Different NPCs could also specialize in specific materials to add lore and intrigue into their characters.
Encounters
To make a game feel alive, interaction and choice are the answer. Having options that impact gameplay will add so much re-playability. Going to jail and Margots estate are good examples. Consequences to one’s actions envelope the player into the game.
Other interact-able NPCs to buy other cosmetics, adornments for the apartment, and consumables, would flush out the game as well.
Support
You’ve made a great game. Your work has not gone unnoticed. I think having a platform where people can support your creation and vision, is a good idea. I really cannot wait to see where this goes and whats next!