Better late feedback than ever. Its very nice to see that you're using every new organic instrument you made yourself or bought at some point. Thats also why I like the very piece the most since its very "primitive" and organic which fits the enviornnement, i think i'll repeat myself but I would like the percussion to be a bit more boomy and bassy, it can be subtle but just to give a "oomph" to the tracks. You'll also need to fix some tempo and rythm playing I know you're playing yourself everything but still i'll go hard on this one, record again and again if need be XD. The third painting was unexpected if possible I think its a nice beginning for a flute concerto or something that you can probably expand later with a full orchestra. Also 4th painting boom those percs and some playing has to change also, I know eerything was rushed and incomplete so you did what you could in the time allowed. Desolation is also very cool like the first one I can recognized your style over all on this one going back to the beginning. There we go hope you enjoyed the critique :)