Can't believe I forgot to come here! SO let's go:
(1- Red Lenses) Okay so before everything else, I love that you're explaining your theme and your tracks with other art you madman xD. This first track does fit really well with the first picture, feels like someone walking on a city and then sneaking somewhere. I think given what you posted you recorded yourself, and I'm not sure it was intentional, but there's a slight delay with the bass playing, and it wouldn't be too noticeable but because it's a repeating line, my mind keeps focusing on it for some reason. But overall track one really good, I wish the bass would be a bit more impactful in the mix but it's a nitpick.
(2- Pale Fire) Second track sells the picture as well perfectly, you did a great job finding something that works for sneaking in while still being energetic in a way, great!
(3- En Force) I think that's probably where you see the 48h limit hit harder with the mixing that's lacking (don't worry, it's the same for fking everyone or almost), I hope you'll give it a go cause it rocks! Love that you're adding intensity, while having similar to a danger alert, really good. Also I wasn't expecting a guitar solo DUDE xD that was really cool!
(4- Finally Free) I think it perfectly suits the mood, the protagonist is free, but because of how you made the story about the giant dome, it doesn't just positively resolve, there is tension which makes sense, as they've never seen the outside world. I really enjoy that you were able to do a great deal of storytelling by being really specific on how you did this track specifically.
I've read your project page which helped a bit more on the context, really appreciate the detail and the fact that you did MORE art is insane to me lol amazing!
Anyways super solid OST, I enjoyed it a lot and like how you told the story through the tracks. I do hope you'll be able to spend some time on mixing for it after the jam, because I think it would be fully realized then.
Excellent taff franchement, épaté!