First of all thanks for taking the time to write this detailed review, it is very appreciated !
1) Thanks for checking out the project's page (I've first begun illustrating my track ideas on the first comp jam I joined because I initially had a bit of spare time, and now it has become a habit to do so because it helps bring out the various details of the story I envision in my head when writing music, this time with colors since it had a lot of relevance with the picture theme and the bleak red and black future of my story).
For the bass indeed it could have been tighter (not quite used with being steady on the Bass VI when recording compared to other basses, I'm working on it).
2) For this one, I wanted some anticipation (with the synth and cymbals driving the song) mixed with moments of sporadic tension (with the different parts and slowdowns), so glad that it came through when listening to it.
3) Yeah that one was pretty tough to adjust (even when trying to listen to it with my computer and phone speakers after having worked on it through my headphones), fortunately I think I'll work back on it at some point to make it more balanced (could be a great exercice to practice mixing with complex heavy tracks by the way, I've done it already with some metal tracks trying to record and mix myself as faithfully as possible but never with tracks full of synths sound, so it could be a great opportunity to do so).
And yeah solos are cool, when there is an opportunity for one I'm taking it of course !
4) That is a pretty accurate description of what I had in mind, I wanted the track to feel like some sort of liberation for the protagonist without it being too triumphant (the dome is still present and the outside world is still out of reach for the moment).
Initially I wanted to give the track some sort of resolution in an hypothetical second part, but by listening to it in the context of the previous tracks in a more advanced state, I realized that it wouldn't make a lot of sense with the worldbuilding and the story so far : I kept it purposefully in this unresolved state for this reason (true freedom in the outside world might be reachable for her later, but right now feeling the glimpse of outside is just a foretaste of what might be yet to come for her).
To conclude thanks a lot for your comment (it definitely inspired me to take the time to take a look back at my tracks in the near future after the jam) and glad that you enjoyed listening and reading through my submission !
Et merci encore pour le commentaire détaillé, ça fait super plaisir !