Fantastic VN with great artwork and a lovely story. I did get a couple of errors in the web build that might have caused some graphics problems and maybe a crash at the end.
Reminds me of another game called "Before your Eyes"
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Graphics | #10 | 4.125 | 4.125 |
| End-of-life plan | #28 | 3.875 | 3.875 |
| Overall | #39 | 3.521 | 3.521 |
| Theme relevance | #53 | 3.688 | 3.688 |
| Jam Authenticity | #62 | 3.875 | 3.875 |
| Sound | #78 | 2.750 | 2.750 |
| Fun | #85 | 2.812 | 2.812 |
Ranked from 16 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Source Code URL
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1kDpS6b0Wa_ogBUO1Vrwr9SqBkdQhoq-l?usp=sharing
End life plan
It'll stay downloadable, and in the future I may do an expanded re-release with director's commentary and the like
Transparency note
The entire game was made during the jam. nothing was thought up or made beforehand.
Fantastic VN with great artwork and a lovely story. I did get a couple of errors in the web build that might have caused some graphics problems and maybe a crash at the end.
Reminds me of another game called "Before your Eyes"
Oh that’s evil </3 I really don’t think I got the good ending but I played through until the game wouldn’t let me anymore and I certainly got an ending…
I said it before on someone else’s submission, but VNs are seriously underrated so I’m always thrilled when I come across one, especially in jams like this. Incredible work! You’ve crafted a beautiful story!
Very nice art and plus points for having the source code available.
Great game! It is very well done and polished. I love all the art and the story telling is impressive. I will say, I have yet to get "the ending". I have limited time tonight but I will be giving it a replay when I am able. Good job! Also, if you have some time, I'd love to hear what you think about my game!
Not really my type of game, but I was positively surprised by the story and art and ultimately enjoyed my time with the game.
I couldn't get another ending, and only now do I see the comment where you mention there are more rooms. I'll try again
By the way, your drawings are very pretty ^^
OH THERE WAS AN ENTIRE OTHER ROOM??
that explains everything lol. thanks TheCeo16 for telling me! i now think that I’ve beaten the game (i was playing on the browser and now the game quits itself every time, so yeah I’m guessing what that “reset tool” is, although it seems to not be in the browser version.)
thanks again devs! good job making the game :D
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