This is quite fun!
Creativity: Great idea
Enjoyment: Although I encountered a bug in level 1 so I couldn't play, reloading seems to do  the trick lol, fun game overall
Narrative: Has actual dialouges, 10/10
Artwork: I like the vibe it gives
Audio: Nothing really special

I liked the aesthetic and colors you used. I want to know what comes next!

Game Was Preety nice, with cronicles of what devs think that are glictches, Preety Nice One 👍👍

I love it!!!!

Did you make the art yourself? I love it's like a Baba Is You aesthetic

Cool game! First one I've seen with a real narrative haha

Played again :D Overall really well polished game, and I think the last day changes improved the game a lot! The gameplay feels more intuitive with the drops marked. In addition, I don't know if I remembered it correctly, but the camera movement feels much smoother than before as well. Now moving on to the game itself:

I really loved the atmosphere and the random glitch outs. Suits very well to a narrative-based story, which enhanced the atmosphere greatly. Nothing else to say about the visuals and polishing part. They are extremely well constructed overall.

With the gameplay, the level progression provided additional enjoyment from just repeating the same loop over and over again. The narratives are really well done, and I think the narrator played a really decent part in the story. If you are going to do a post jam version, I would love to see the narrative taking more highlight! Overall well balanced. 

Great job!

First jam game?? Absolutely incredible. The level design is so damn good, and the ideas and how they're executed is pretty close to perfect imo. Really damn good job on this! If I really had to pick out something, the controls were a little too floaty at times, might need tightening up a little especially with this kinda platforming.

Very nice, I love the level design

Loved the premise on this one!  Really good, had a clean feel though I think I would have liked it to be a little faster and better control over the acceleration.  See the other comment about checking out the GMTK vid on this.  But really well done for a first jam!  Welcome to the club!

I really enjoyed the game, but playing the mostly same level over, and over again will always get a bit tedious, and I felt like with how floaty the character was, and how weirdly stiff the movement was, it got like that so fast. The art direction was absolutely lovely though, and it made for a great looking game!

5/7

[system] thanks for playing 

I really enjoyed playing your game 

when the level glitch on every loop I thought I was hacked 

the narrative work was unexpectable in a cool way , also the colors used in The environment reminded me of a game called "Baba is you".

over all the game was amazing :3

Awesome idea! I was skeptical reading the description, but making the same parts of the level fun to replay by adding things and changing things each time works very well to keep it interesting. Honestly I would've liked to see the game lean into that a little bit more, even. Amazing job!!

i loved it! the idea of an expanding level is genius, espacially with this really cool level design and art. you did an amazing job for a first jam, would absolutly like to see you develop this idea after the jam!

Good job for a first gamejam! I like the artstyle and the colors used. Also, one of the only games I've played so far with an actual story lol

I love playing games that have some deeper narrative meaning behind them, fun game!

I really like the character design in this. ahhaa congrats !!

Awesome first game jam submission! It was my first game jam too! I really like your sprite work, excellent job.

Really impressive for your first game jam! I liked the concept, narrative, and art. Great work :D