Very cool sound design attemp, I know its not your strong suit to try synths/piano stuff but still did a nice job regardeless, I like the story telling. The sound design at the beginning is super neat I like it alot, I wanted this to be part of the whole track building up around those. Again I will repeat this forever you - need - to - put - some - BASSSSSSSSSSS, you know how a long ambient build up would feel amazing when the low end finally hits the mark. Anyway good job :)