Hello!

This game is really cute, has good music, and generally worked well for me. Feels like a solid entry. The moment-to-moment gameplay feels good... jumping and landing on another planet is satisfying and a good base for a complete game.

That's where things got a bit dicey for me:

• First times few times I just didn't get what I was supposed to do... but a few times lost in space later and I figured it out.
• But please make the death screen skippable, I want to be back playing... now!
• Then I learned to jump... and on my first delivery got eaten by a dog... those likely shouldn't be introduced until later in the game
• Soon I was jumping around like some sort of space ninja postal worker
• At which point I realized that the game just turns impossible very quickly, I always get a delivery which is just too far to make in time

So, there are some nice graphics, sounds, and moment-to-moment gameplay, so in general I think that's a very good start! But this game needs a better difficulty progression badly... set me up so I can jump around and deliver packages for at least ten+ minutes, then bring the variety... a limited jetpack maybe? Aliens? Black holes that alter your trajectory? Keep going!

Hello! Welcome to Feedback Quest 8! My name's Hythrain, a co-host and one of the streamers for this event! This feedback is being written live as I stream your game! If you're interested in seeing my live reaction, let me know and I can send you a link to the VOD once it's posted to YouTube!

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A fun little delivery game, but there are definitely some problems to it. For starters, switching from planet to planet can be way too accurate. If you're just slightly off when you jump, you're considered to not make it to the planet when you probably should.  This, combined with tight timers, makes the game feel very difficult very quickly. I'd get timers giving me such short windows that I couldn't spend the time to ensure I was lining up my jumps perfectly.

In addition, if a planet is slightly too far (yet you can see it on the edge of the screen, the game doesn't consider these jumps valid either)

What I'd recommend is creating a sort of safety net for each world, where you can be a bit outside of a direct line with touching that world yet "gravity" will pull you to it. This would make the shorter timers work out a lot better as now players don't need to be as perfectly accurate.

Hey! 30crl here.

Looked into this game as I also have a thing for space and space travel. I like the concept a lot, I wish you would develop on it, maybe turn it into a roguelite with upgrades and different mechanics and worlds to explore.

At the moment a few things could be improved in my opinion. Floating into space is a little bit frustating as it might seem like you are under a planet but you missed it by a tiny bit and then you're gone. I think maybe a long jump that would make you lose a few seconds would be a bit more fun and really make that time attack mechanic stand out.

Cheers!

Hi, Mayshing here, co-host of FeedBackQuest. Welcome! 

My kiddo and I enjoyed this game, though the frustration of floating off too easily did end our play test a bit quickly. 

My wish: The robot has a jetpack that can help itself to float back to orbit if jumped off at wrong angle, gives me a bit of hope I can make it back from my mistake would make this game less frustrating and game loop end too easily. 

Overall a fan of this cute delivery bot, hope to see more updates on it! (time: 03:19:12)