For critques: A slow start that I feel spends too much time filling space rather than establishing the themes that come up later, and kinda stilted dialogue but that's where it ends, because I really liked this. I was able to cotton onto the metaphor pretty early and felt rewarded for that. The slow changes to the background that are only obvious once you notice. The morgue doors with two corpses for two characters. The water sound that continues through the start. The reference to the things in the background being pulled from TV; memory. Just a fantastic use of the medium to establish these themes and set up the ending. I love when people use the medium to merge with the themes like you did, that's something I ALWAYS love to see, give yourself a pat on the back for that one. God I really fucking liked this.