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Play book
The Maw's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #33 | 3.600 | 3.600 |
| Flow & Clarity | #35 | 3.200 | 3.200 |
| Overall | #40 | 3.240 | 3.240 |
| Adherence to Theme | #49 | 2.920 | 2.920 |
Ranked from 25 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Hey, I'm going to narrate some of the entries from this jam and put them on YouTube, would it be alright if I did yours? I'd credit you of course.
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CheesecakeThe switch-up at the end is jarring, but works in its way. I'm curious why the sword has itself just in the pit instead of leading a warband elsewhere--does the sword only wish to eat, and not care about anything else?
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HomecomingThe build up is very interesting. The environnement is missing some small details here and there to clearly statuate were and why this is happening but overall nice to read
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The Vengeful's WrathGreat setup and great payoff! It did feel as though the theme was a little forced in. I do like how "take it all" refers back to the description in the beginning, well done.
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CheesecakeI really enjoyed this, the second half more than the first. A couple of little issues - a sentence missing a word in the middle of the story and it took too long to establish Jonathan as being in the cage. Overall, really enjoyable!
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The War Against Time
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