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Something Other than a Man's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Flow & Clarity | #4 | 3.909 | 3.909 |
| Overall | #6 | 3.833 | 3.833 |
| Adherence to Theme | #10 | 3.636 | 3.636 |
| Concepts & Originality | #10 | 3.955 | 3.955 |
Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
High lighting Grimdark Future's world in such a light, cold an calculated juxtaposed by the very essence of humanity that he gave up. A terrific story, the mood board's minis are a beautiful addition.
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Free Fall - OPR Writing Jam #14Thank you! The nucleus of the idea was the way in which rich and powerful people become disconnected from humanity once they reach a point where every human need is met without question. I like the idea of self-contained sci-fi battle armor as a metaphor for mundane wealth and would have liked to explore that in conversation with the Founder/Conduit a bit more. Also, thank you for the compliment on the minis!
Loved it!
There is a lot going on being that helmet! The atmosphere is great and it is flowing perfectly.
Submitted
The Vengeful's WrathI absolutely loved the ending lines! Such a good note to end on; great job with this piece!
Submitted
To Strive For Greatness
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